SS Part 6 of My Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Kiss)

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

ooh! so this may be this first time i'm commenting on this SS. I haven't read the whole thing. Only part 4,5,6 I think. I have to say, I really loved this whole concept and turn of events.

the scene between Arnav and Khushi in the car was too beautiful. I could actually feel their pain and heartbreak, especially Arnav's.

Good job!👏

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

awesome update. loved how Chachu is trying to bring them together and doesn't want her to make the same mistake as he has done. do continue. so loooking forward.

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awesome update

loved the interaction of arnav and khushi

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Fab update.. Khushi gave it back well.. Feel sorry for arnav but he needs to be in receiving sometime

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ayshanoel

@ayshanoel

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

me likie where this story is going

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SStephy

@SStephy

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

An interesting part!! Looking forward to the next...

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Nandalala

@Nandalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Ooohhh, so much going on, Mary!!! I loved the ArHi scene together...so much unsaid passion...But another misunderstanding in the class debate...words left unspoken...

Khushi is so perceptive...she figured out who Chachu's love was, yet her love & the misconceptions prevent her from seeing/fully acknowledging Arnav's truth when it comes to her...

Love the pictorials for Iwad & the Nawab...I also liked the pace of the story...

A ball for Khushi...can't WAIT!!!

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laniland

@laniland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

That was very exciting. I loved the Arshi moment. Would love to see that repeat in the ball 😉 Would love to see them getting along. I can hardly wait for the next update... Hope you will update soon. Well done Mary!! 👏 LoMoreoking forward to the ball and see what happens next... 😍