I didn't expect this to end so soon. I mean we were still tuned to the hospital scenario when Shakti was recovering and when I received your pm, I expected a normal update. But, then comes a shocker. It's en epilogue. I actually felt really sad that you ended this soon. I know like you mentioned in the reasons that you seemed to have lost your inspiration and didn't wish to ruin the story. So, I guess it's justified. However, I hadn't expected the end so soon.
Coming to the epilogue, it was brilliantly written! I loved every bit of it. All the dialogues, especially, they were very effective. It starts with Shakti demanding ice-cream for breakfast! :P and Amar has to give in since he can't see his sweetheart crying. Shakti is pregnant and all this is a part of her mood swings. I loved the way she teased Mukti that you can go ahead with the setting with my husband. Next, when they are ready for the party, Shakti feels really conscious and calls her an elephant and a huge whale! :P I really loved the way Kunwar comforted her. Lastly, the scene when ArSha become parents and the way they hold their baby boy in their arms. Truly, 'Start of Something Beautiful'
I loved the way you ended this, I don't actually want to use the word 'end'. Reading this FF had become like a ritual and now when there won't be any updates it makes me feel really sad. This was my first ArSha FF and undoubtedly you and your writing made me love ArSha even more.
Good job! You are an amazing writer Pria.
I love ArHi and I am pretty excited to read something on them from your side. Do add me to your pm list and start that SS really soon.
Love you girl! :)
Do come up with a sequel to this FF, if possible. I love this very much. Will miss reading it a lot! :(
Thanks for the pm
Anupamaa
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