ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30 - Page 58

Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

di i loved it

amazing

for a moment i thoght amar will kill the goons

bt watever happened was really unexpected

bt it was it was very good

i loved it

well done

keep up the good work

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

ahhh what was that ????????

cant believe what all happened...dont know what to say

and in the end GOD it was horrible ...shakti in such a situation SHIT...

dont know how to react, shakti confessed her love for him 😊but her dreadful condition😭

dont you even think to kill shakti...

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Extremely shocking n intense...luvd it 2 d core...n yaa...filmy 2...glad amar,archie n dharmesh came on tym...n i knw u wont kill shaks...
Waitng fr nxt part...update soon...:)

Originally posted by: sukanyaa

pria sweeetiiee...me luvd the update...

full on bollywood flick ...

thankfully they just stabbed dose creepy ppl...they dare nt do anythng else...

n yup update soon...

Originally posted by: arshalover26

what an update pria i m literally shocked and even have no words for this intense part. really a big twist but i know shakti di will soon come in senses. plz update next part soon i just can't wait. ur ff is really turning into interesting one...

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

omg...u r right i m shocked...

n yes it was intense..d tears r still flowing from my eyes...

i cant tel u how much i loved reading it...

seriously hats off to u..u r such an amazing writer...

amazing n wonderful update...

plz plz update soon..cant wait for d next part...

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

red: comment abt update

black: tujhse baatein

seriously aaj paper deke yahi soch rhi thi ki when she'll update and aftr returning and checking net and i was like iski aur iske ff ki baahut lamb umar hai rey...

and then it waas hell lot of time to load but then also i was so happy that u updated i was imagining ki kya-2 ho sakta hai as first part was loaded and then mujhe laga that the person turning her was amar but no...

aftr sometime it compltetly loaded ad started reading further and i was like now the hero's entry. huyi toh sahi and uske baad jo huya the fight was awesome and his emotion were superbly displayed

but uske baad u ended on that point and i was thinking nhi the most appropriate saying was think of the devil and the devil appears

i mean aisa koi karta hai... aisa cliffhanger

pakka either u watched castle season 3 ending again or a pakka masala movie jahan intermission se pehle aisa jhatka dete hai...

one question: where did she get stabbed???

coming to update:
apart from the shock and the intensity the update was awesome in terms of the way u described their feelings. initially shakti's confusion, her hesitation, her sadness was all very well displayed and then how amar was angry and the words u used for his anger was superb..
the end was touchy but apart from that cliffhanger the way he was clinging to her for his life, how he ws doing everything to stop her frm closing her eyes and how his emotions were swaying frm anger to possessiveness to shock everything was superbly describe..

yep the sight was very depressing to imagine and so if some watches it then that wud be heart wrenching. the way u described it was superb. it was like a movie going on and u were the narrator...

now plz update asap.. get in a very good mood like u got in a previous update and give update asap. aise humein heart attacks dena acchi baat nhi.. plz jaldi se update and kill the suspense. update as soon as possible. don't be a devil be an angel and update asap

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

yes yes yes totally shocked...n i was lyk WTH is happening...n dat bloody goon 😡...hw dare dey touch her...dere dirty minds...i want to kill dem...bt shakti is brave girl she fought wid dem...bt as u wrote filmy dey have to overtake her...n love da way kunwar fought wid dem 4 his love of his lyf...awww kunwar is such a sweetheart
bt WTH is dat shakti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭
bt she said I LOVE U aww...i love it priya da way u wrote da scene it seems lyk i was watching some movie...hehe
thnkew dear 4 a super duper awsumm update 😃

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was shocking yaar those guys i tell i would have killed them but our hero amar came and saved her was amazing
todays update was shocking, filmy and nice
waiting for nxt update
plz update soon.
Thankx for pm

Originally posted by: prrk86

total filmy but awesome and i know shakti will open her eyes

coz heroin can't dye leaving hero alone😉