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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really a sad update n the twist u brought here was gud n needed for making them realize their true feelings for each other 😊
Shakti was trying her best to ignore him n that resulted in to a big problem for her.
She was alone n the atmosphere where she was present can create such problems for her when d boys were drunk n not in their senses.🤔
She tried her best to fight with them n protested as much as she could but they were too tough for her n when they have decided to do such cheap things so they could have been go up to any extent.😔
Thank god Archie, Kunwar n Dharmesh came at perfect time when Kunwar was that he should not rush up with Shaks in hurry.😕
That was obvious he couldn't control his anger seeing her Shaks in that pitiable condition n no one was able to tame her only it was Shaks drowning voice which made him stop n he rushed to her.😭
She was stabbed n her condition was going down with each passing seconds n Kunwar wanted to make her awake but she passed out.
Hope she gets to hospital asap n be back in her sense.
Update soon
---Shailu--- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hawww...such a chap dear !!!!
never thought of it...
but yeah...i ws like WTH !!!
those Do*g * !!!
arggghh...bloddy rascals !!!!
i seriously am very shcked to see shakti's condition...poor her !!!!
But hope is update ke baad will definitely get to see arsha's chemistry grew stronger !!!!
so waiting fr ur next update sweetie...
do sooon nd PM me !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Full thrilling update pria👍🏼 n dont u dare kill shakthi... ur each update is more awesome dan d previous one👏... not once u have disappointed me with ur updates... i wait for ur updates eagerly🤗... unn badmash ladko ko mujhe bhi maarna hai😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc update 👏

Hope nothing happen 2 shakti

Thx for pm 😊
achuAR thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Uan uan...shaks ko hospital bhej diya tune???grrr😆
This was faab pria...
It was really sweet of amar how he kept talking to shaks to keep her awake 😍(in ur ff)😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg shuld i comment a hell NO DEAR DIS IS bloody awesum pria u just literally killed me no words *dead* purely

love u ya

thnx for d pm

update very soon
lovekriyaansh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment... badmaash net mera dimaag kharab karing..purra sunday bigaad diya isne...
nw coming to the update...
OMG!! What was that Priya?? As anki said the update was dhansu...unexpected and totally filmy..but loved it.. its grt to be filmy at times u see!!! nd I know you you wont kill her so no need to convince you.. 😆 Ab jaldi se update kariyo...wait nahi hota...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pria, luved it yaar. A way too dramatic n intense one but stll u rocked it. Brilliantly potrayed n expressed. I was amazed by the way u portrayed Shakti's pain n finally I m happy abt the I LOVE YOU line.
I didn't get a pm. Do pm me na, u r in my buddy list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part Pria!
after quite sometime, felt it to be so much action packed, intense and shocking too!
cliffhanger?! this isn't done..!
i loved this part a lot, pretty long..and i really appreciate that you didn't show Amar helping her out get off the grip of those cheap fellows..! like it is always shown in films..it took him time..but those cheap guys! sick!
and they hurt her so much..blood oozing out of her body..!
thriller update! and at the end she confesses her love for him..and is lying unconscious, i hope she gets well soon..!
and dare you make her die!! get it? :P
she is our heroine! i know she'll be fine after a while..!
very well penned!
update asap!
thnx fr d pm
--Ritu-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved it 2 the core...!!!!!!plz pm me wenever u update..😊😊

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