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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Electric_BuBBle
Wow, awesome OS! I really loved reading it alot! <3

It was written excellently! It was simply brillaint! :D

Thanks for the PM! Loved it!

Aww thank u🤗

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Oh. It was beautiful but I want to shake Khushi really hard and make her remember and admit all of those moments!

Please turn it into a SS or FF! :)

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

OK just read part 2 and I am speechless at Arnav's feeling. Awesome Job Asma. ❤️ 🤗

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queenie11

@queenie11

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This is beautiful! Absolute wonderful. Each moment was perfectly rendered

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Wow. Beautiful read, really!!

You always managed to depict such a wonderful tale in just two parts, be it just a small thought, or a scene. First off, I really liked how in the first part, before falling asleep, they both held onto each other, tightly, hoping against hope that this will remain, that what they were feeling, they would be able to remember when they woke up...I was in a trance right then, because its a scary thought when you know that you'll forget everything once you'll wake up, or your memories will be a blur...and you DONT want that, its like they were fighting for it, literally!!!

Second, the little Anjali bit...I usually dont like Anjali being the kabab mein haddi, but oh boy was I glad that she saw them sleeping, all cuddled up, and then, she informed her husband. OH YEAH. I had a smile right then...an evil one ;) LOL!!

And, now once they woke up...they remember, both of them, very clearly, but do they wish to come to terms with it? to talk about it? Hmm...not really, and that for me is justified. I like how the slow realization came upon both of them...and then, the mirror memoriess...I could completely imagine themm!!!! I also liked how Arnav questioned her, because he has FINALLY started to think and somewhat believe that if what they did through their bhangified state was real, then, he mustve made a mistake in understanding Khushi..then, maybe their marriage wouldnt be what it is...and as for Khushi, I would have liked her to somehwat leave a bigger hint at Arnav sort of telling him that yes I do remember, but Im scared...scared to admit it to youu..scared of what will happen...so yeah, admit it Khushi!! He will take care of you, girl!

In all, I LOVEDDD ITTT!!

Sorry if I blabbed away too much, but it felt good reading this!! Your a wonderful writer!! Will be waiting to read more from you, always!

- Dee

P.s I want pms from you😳

Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

loved it asma!! that was really cute and nice...

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nyxx
Wow. Beautiful read, really!!

You always managed to depict such a wonderful tale in just two parts, be it just a small thought, or a scene. First off, I really liked how in the first part, before falling asleep, they both held onto each other, tightly, hoping against hope that this will remain, that what they were feeling, they would be able to remember when they woke up...I was in a trance right then, because its a scary thought when you know that you'll forget everything once you'll wake up, or your memories will be a blur...and you DONT want that, its like they were fighting for it, literally!!!

Second, the little Anjali bit...I usually dont like Anjali being the kabab mein haddi, but oh boy was I glad that she saw them sleeping, all cuddled up, and then, she informed her husband. OH YEAH. I had a smile right then...an evil one ;) LOL!!

And, now once they woke up...they remember, both of them, very clearly, but do they wish to come to terms with it? to talk about it? Hmm...not really, and that for me is justified. I like how the slow realization came upon both of them...and then, the mirror memoriess...I could completely imagine themm!!!! I also liked how Arnav questioned her, because he has FINALLY started to think and somewhat believe that if what they did through their bhangified state was real, then, he mustve made a mistake in understanding Khushi..then, maybe their marriage wouldnt be what it is...and as for Khushi, I would have liked her to somehwat leave a bigger hint at Arnav sort of telling him that yes I do remember, but Im scared...scared to admit it to youu..scared of what will happen...so yeah, admit it Khushi!! He will take care of you, girl!

In all, I LOVEDDD ITTT!!

Sorry if I blabbed away too much, but it felt good reading this!! Your a wonderful writer!! Will be waiting to read more from you, always!

- Dee

P.s I want pms from you😳

Hii Dee!! First a big🤗 for writing such an awesome comment and please dont say sorry for it! I love to read what people think because then i start to wonder if what I'm writing is actually any good!

You really got everything just the way i wanted it to come across, especially about the not forgetting part because it was important that they didnt want to forget it. Oh I did feel as tho I should have given him more of a hint from Khushi but sometimes I'm just mean like that😉 No but in truth i guess she's seen how he can switch from one extreme to another in a flash and she doesnt quite trust what she's remembering yet either.

I hope Arnav goes through even some of these thought processes in the show because i think it's really about time he started to connect the dots more!

Thanks for enjoying my writing, glad u enjoy it so much😳 Oh and btw, I had an evil smile right then too, i had the feeling of putting a tongue out smiley at the end - so would have loved to see the creep's face at that point😆

Oh wow now i wrote so much lol! Thanks again for commenting🤗

Asma x