DOLI SAJAKE RAKHNA [KRIYANSH FF]UPDATE-NEW THREAD - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing ff,,,,,,,,plz pm me plzzz
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buddy post quicklt the next part as possible am waiting for your update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Dear amazing Fic plz do pm. Btw dear had a requst its hard to see the text could you use more darker color and not write in caps.

Sorry if i hurt you, i didn't mean to hurt you.
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CHAPTER 2

The next day louians left for dehradun.rey was lost in kria's thoughts, he was trying to avoid it but he could not.swayum was noticing this.they reached dehradun

they reached there by evening 4:30pm[sorry,they left for dehradun in morning not in the evening]they went to shilpa's house as the marriage was happening over there.kria's house is the next house to shilpa's.
kria's house-khurana masnsion 1
shilpa's house-khurana mansion 2
khuarana mansion1-kria's house
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khurana 2-shilpa's house
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they got down down of the bus.everyone was staring at kapoor mansion in surprise.armann and shilpa was waiting for them outside the house.louians went to armann and shilpa.

rey:hey shilpa bhabi.
[gives a hug to her]
shilpa:hey rey.
armann:a rey sala bhabi ko dekha toh apna bhai ko bhool guyi.
[they hug each other,shilpa smiles]
sha:armann bhai hum bhi yaha pa hai.hume bhabi se toh milvayia.
arm;of course sharon.guys yeh mere hoonwali patni shilpa .
everyone:hai bhabi.
shilpa;hai guys.
[girls gives her a group hug ]
shilpa; armann yeh log ko mujhse introduce nahi karvahuenge kya?
armann:sorry baba,yeh sharon,swayum ,vicky,neha...
neha;bhabi kya mein apko didi bhula sakta hai kya
shilpa;of course neha.
sharon:toh di yeh batoo ki apki or arman bhai ka love story kaise hyi..{shilpa blushes hardly]
armann;kya baat hai meri basket itna blush kyu kar rehi?
shilpa:armann...
rey:bhai ap bhabi ko kyu parashan kartha rehtha hai?
arm:bhabhi chamcha
shilpa:bhabi ki chamcha hoto kya?tum humshe choti[kria] ki saath meri tang keech thi hu na,toh ab dekha the hai[rey was hugging shilpa like a kid]
rey;choti kyun?
shilpa:woh mere choti behan hai.aao tum ko usse milti,par pehla tum log fresh hoka aao.
shilpa:tum sab armaan ki side se hai kya?
all the girls:nahi di hum log apke side se hai?
boys:aur hum armann bhai ki side se.
shilpa:ok girls chalo mein tum log ka kamra dikata hai.aur armann tum boys unke kamra dekhao.

they all goes to their respective rooms.now only close family and friends are staying their[including kria,maneet,arohi..] are their as shaadi cermony startes after one days.they all got fresh up and comes down.shilpa introduce the gang to her family i.e her parents,dada dadi,maneet,arjun etc.now only one person is left and that is our dearest kria.
shilpa asks to the bacha party presnt their[bacha party are the children of shilpa's close relative.she asks them because they know about her wherabouts]gang is present their
shilpa:bacho choti kaha.
child 1;di toh college se aaye hi nahi
shilpa;kya.
child2;woh kya hai na , kal se di ka vacation start ho raha hai aur woh us college ki gs bhi hoon.toh iss liye woh abi tak nahi aye.
shilpa;ruk mein uska kabar leti hoon.
[she calls kria]
shilpa:choti tu kaha hai.jaldi se ghar pa aajav aur much sun na hai
kria;di mein rahste mein hi hoon.ruk mein 10 min mein aati hoon.
shilpa:ok choti,bye.
manee,armann shilpa,arohi arjun.and louians were siting in the loan after sometime a red bmw top open car reaches kapoor mansion.
bmw car
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and a girl comes out of it.louians were shock to see her.
precap;shilpa;yeh meri choti behan kria
louians;kya...
please click the like button if u liked it.please do the commenting part also

Edited by unnipgc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing contd...waiting for d further story and all the best for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesumm

updt fast next tym...nd thxx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amesome update yaar bhabhi ka chamcha that was so cute and loved the precap eagerly waiting for nxtchapter update soon and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awsum..eagerly waiting for the next chapter plzz update soon...
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hey... nice update... so finally they have reached dehradun... and gang to meet kriya eagerly waiting for the next update... and thanks a lot for the pm...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
hey just luved it yaar!!!
do update the next part sooon...nd do PM me!!!😃

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