DOLI SAJAKE RAKHNA [KRIYANSH FF]UPDATE-NEW THREAD - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
loved it... everyone's gonna get a shock when they meet Kriya😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
yar next update kab hai finally sab kriya se milenge can't wait any more update soon, and today update was awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome...
luved it...
rey apni bhabi ki side le raha hai hehehehe
n eagerly waiting for the next part...plzzz update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
amazing loved the update and thanks for the pm it was great and loved it but next update make sure that kriya comes in
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesome update and thanks for the pm 😃and did you really have to stop at that point 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
It was really nice update can PM me when you update next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Luv it! It's great! Love it how you wrote all the details including the houses and the cars...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
1 choose any options
1.kria,mann and sharon are siblings.they got seprated as some misunderstanding comes in between their parents.sharon elder than kria by 15 mins.
2.smriti and gautham are sharon's parents.they gets spiltted due to some misunderstanding.so smriti joins back with her family.
smriti has on more elder brother named viren.kria and mann are his children.his wife megha dies after giving birth to kria.
so when smriti comes back,she rembers about sharon and she becomes very attached kria and mann. so they thinks that smriti is thier mother and thinks viren is their mamu.viren sacrifices his children as he knows that they need mother's love . mann and kria calls viren as dad because they are very attached to him.
but mann and kria gets to know that viren and megha is thier orginal parents and smriti is their bua[mann was 9 years and kria 4 years].but they still treats smriti as their mom and calls her ma.so when smriti gets transfer to mumbai,she asks kria to shift with her to mumbai.which kria agrees.kria is the princess of viren.viren,smrit, mann ,geet and kria lives in khurana mansion.in this case i will change smriiti's character sketch.
3.just continue the story as it is.
2 choose any option
1.rey should get to know why kria left him before the cermony starts.that is within two days after they meet.
2.rey should get to know why kria left him during the wedding functions.
3.he should get to know the reason after the shaadi.

please suggest the options
Edited by unnipgc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
for the second quest i'll choice rey coming to know eventually during marriage.
for the first all three are gr8 so go on with ur choice
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
All the options are good but I think you should do it that Rey finds out h reason while are the wedding things are goin on :D

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