SS: Part 5 My Avenging Angel (Jealous Khushi) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh HOW I LOVE AGGRESSIVE KHUSHI AND SOBER ARNAV...;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Loved it 😊 !!!! You are an amazing writer !!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh gosh! This party has become an emotional show down! Arnav still wearing the ring is too cute, him taking it off and giving it back to her made me wanna cry out!! Oefff you laad governor! And the princess, princess makes me wanna slap him! Hahahah plus I love Anjali going back to the real Anjali - not the dreamy: I'm a barbie girl, living in a barbie world one we see sometimes! Great update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it.
Waiting for the next part.
Hope both of them realize the concern for each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was quite curious about your SS. I read all the parts and I am liking this.

Even though never have been fan of melodrama, but I am liking yours.

This seems Khushi does not want his guilt, but she wants him to fight for her. While Arnav has given up on Khushi as he thinks she is better off without him.

I had a feeling you will show a jealous Khushi and I am glad you did.

Please bring that original ASR back.This does not suit him lol.

You have written their parts well.

Please do continue.




Edited by sunflower52 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very thoughtful and wonderful...great😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!.. This Is Relii Awesome.. Keep It Up!..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fab story. I am getting so excited ... not sure as to where you are going with the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! Tables turned..this is some good fun.its really difficult to see Arnav calm..lol!
Khushi just hug him dear:-)))

Great update:-)))

Ash.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Wow Khushi the main guest of the party and arnav is at the same party wht a twist loool loving itt well thought out dont think cvs can do better than this hehe do update soon and thanks for the pm when 6 comes out please pm me agen
Thank you 😊
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