SS: Part 5 My Avenging Angel (Jealous Khushi)

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diya09

@diya09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

liked it too much... Please continue.. too good to read their emotions..

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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I feel so sorry for Arnav! Khushi is seriously being bossy!!

Mayb Arnav deesrves this,but still my heart goes out for him..Poor thing!!

Pls Update soon!

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arhi_diwani

@arhi_diwani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

very nice. Pls update soon

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SARA

@zuaireah

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow definitely a confrontation...love is bitter but it's still there. wondering what will happen next...

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Loved it

But I don't like the way khushi is talking to Arnav

I think you should make Chahu play the matchmaker

Bring in some happiness

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Khushi might have a new identity but her innate personality is still the same! Princess or not.. She cant stand being ignored by Arnav. All their interactions have always been a verbal battle! A defeated Arnav is not what she wants right? I hope she catches him and plays Doctor to him! She went to the parking lot right? I'm sure the car will have a first aid kit :P

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Amazing update! jealous Khushi and pent up Arnav👏

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. WHy couldn't they say that they missed each other. Ufff😡😡😡

Can't wait to read more.

Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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medha

@medha16

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

oh god!i can feel all d bottled up emotions u tried to portray...it was very emotional...can fully understand their pain...they both do not want to let go yet r doing so 4 d apparent happiness of their partners which they do not realize lie with both being together...very beautfully written...cud u plz pm me when u update next tym???