SS: Part 5 My Avenging Angel (Jealous Khushi)

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Aparamegha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome..read all the parts in one go..brilliant story line...looking forward to the next part

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catalyst

@catalyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

arnav is being ridiculous i mean he needs to speak up running away is not an option he needs to stop being a coward juss open ur heart speak up i guess thts the solution to it ...

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Sumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hmmm tables have reversed...she wants him to fight back...would be interesting to see such a track in the current scenario in the show...i mean once he realises that he has wronged her...

And she of course being Khushi cannot stop loving him...

Great story...well written...can almost visualise them reacting like that to each other..

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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Amazin part..I had tears in my eyes

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@debby_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

that was a fabulous part..

arnav has bottled up his emotions...its painful for both darya aka his khushi...i guess happier times are near...as fire is on both side..looking forward to the next part

do continue soon :D

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wow!! i just read them and it was amazing!! loved it- A LOT!

Arnav's anguish was amazingly shown - you were just brilliant
its just that i cant come in terms with a helpless arnav and high n might khushi- well that is my problem 😆

will be waiting for the confrontation!!! 😊 bring it on!!!