Mary!!!!⭐️
Ola! How're you? 😃
Am really sorry for not commenting earlier! You see, I'm busy with my exams now!
I just read all the 4 parts in one go! And I must say, your imagination is too good!!
Your story is so Gripping! Mi God! I loved how the story unfolded in front of all of them!
When the courier was received by the family, I did not have even the slightest suspicion that Khushi would be there in Lucknow!
The story has actually come out beautifully and is very encapsulating! I love it!
Arnav is torturing himself, for whatever mistake he committed against Khushi, for injustice he did to Khushi.
The torture he is going through is by far a good one!
No, pal! It ain't melodramatic at all! In fact, it looks so real. Everything, the royalty, the status, the storyline, and your imagination is described so subtly and beautifully that it feels like it is real.
Now, that's how a story should be! Too fairytale-ish binds the hopes of people and becomes to predictable! And too drama-ish, becomes unbearable and emotionally-draining for the audience!
A story should have a balance of drama, comedy, romance, thriller and if required, horror. Though ever story has its highs and lows, it doesn't matter, because that's how the nature functions! Nothing is perfect. If it was, then, everything would be so boring, from my POV! Striving hard to become perfect or to attain perfection is the challenge!
Hahahah...Ooops! Sorry for deviating from the topic! Teehee...😆 I tend to actually!
Anyways, lovely OS!!👏 I've immensely enjoyed it! I would read every line with bated breath and feel lump in my throat as I'd read the Raizada's part. Especially Arnav's.
Way to go, pal!! 👏 Update the next part soon! Hope this comment did make up for my previous unavoidable silence!
Annie😳
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