Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

While beautifully written, it spoke volumes about the anguish they both are going to suffer when Khushi removes herself from his immediate sphere.. both not understanding that however painful it may be for them to be together with this knowledge between them, the distance is going to be far worse!

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

Thank you for the this update... Best birthday Ever!!! she wants to forget all the pain and just live in the present... the kiss was something out of the ordinary,... and the gift.. precious...

-Vika

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#683

Wow!

This was beautiful! I love how you give attention to the tiniest details of every little frame!

Well, that is how you become such an amazing writer! :)

Khushi's letting go, Arnav's coming in, and letting her in too.. Nice..

Oh, and I have the same doubt as Rae.. Did they make love?

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

Awesome work Misty !! You made me all emotional I simply love the intensity and passion you put in your updates! 😳

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

what a nice birthday she have

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

awesome, no one writes first kisses like you do.

The first touch, a memory that would be infused with lavender and strong musk. And the smell of wet earth, of monsoon rain as it came over their molded bodies, in full flow, showering them a seeping pleasant atmosphere.

How can you not fall in love with such lines?

Thanks for the PM.

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ToxicRebel

@ToxicRebel

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

you have a beautiful way with ur words... it was a lovely chapter... .. looking forward to more as always! happy writing :)

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

Fantastic chapter. So beautiful.

Just when i think the last chapter was great you surprise me with another amazing update.

You definately know how to express each emotion in the best of ways. I loved this chapter- from the photo, to the cake, to the birthday celebration and finally to the kiss, which was written so beautifully👏

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#689

Wooah!

Didn't expect it and loved it! Finally there are kissing, at least here, if not on the show! 😃

You write very poetically, and I love reading it.. It sounds often like you are writing sonnets about them... Very regal and royal feel to it... ❤️

Their kiss was amazing... I love the rains, always have.. And the way you described the rain, midnight, and the terrace... And top it up with the kiss! 😍

I can't top wait for the next chapter.. Saw your post to AngelTeen and I am wondering too...

Thank you for the PM!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#690

That was an awesome update. Their first kiss was perfect. Arnav is soo sweet baking her the cake and gifting her the bangles. It was beautifully written