Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#661

beautiful update. great portrayal of emotions :) thank you for the pm :)

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#662

Hey! :)

This is so brilliantly written!
The photos part was so awfully awesome!
I could feel tears stinging the back of my eyes, but I still managed a meek smile through it all! :)

And the birthday celebration too...Stunning!
Arnav baking a cake for her, K dreaming about him...all so cute!

And lastly, the kiss! So passionate, so romantic!
It literally screamed of their undying love for one another! <3

K was still, quite understandably, hesitant about her feelings all along though!
I'm eager to see how things are gonna unfurl! :)

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Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#663

fabulous update...
luved it.

thanks 4 d pm

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sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#664

i felt this update was "VERY POETIC"..

Arnav baking a cake was sooo cute!!!

can't wait to read more..

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

Am supposed to put my feelings in words after dis...it ws a bliss of a kiss...d intensity of feelings is much more dan wt d tv characters share in d soap...so surreal...I wnt dem to go thru d ordeal of knwing Khushi's illness together...she needs to tell it to him...or poor soul he wudnt be able to take it later...he has d right to knw d truth...dat she loves him...she needs to knw dat he loves her...THough d kisses spoke evrythng...dey jst need to verbalize it jst once...n yes he has d biggest ever right to knw abt her cancer...!!!

M so overwhelmed that I jst cnt stop writing...I just loved d update...will wait for d next part eagerly!!!

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meera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#666

i dont know what to write, i still havent recovered from the update...it feels like i am watching a real life couple in love😊 the way you write is magical u have got some great talent dear by the way you keep us spell bound in your works😃 hmm..i feel a little better now...😳.my god their love is crossing all barriers now i dont think they would be able to stay from each other, they would be heartbroken if they did😭 the way you explained their first kiss was beyond imaginable..you poured all their feelings for each other in a mere two or three paragraphs...keep rocking hun👏👏🤗