Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
That was so beautiful. This Arnav is all action isnt he! Getting her the bangles, taking her pictures, baking her a cake. When Anjali told him to do something I thought he would arrange something extravagant. But he chose to bake it himself cause he had a good measure of what Khushi would really appreciate. Loved it!

And the kiss and more.. Well. It was all building up to this point was't it. And you cant get a more beautiful setting than a rainy night! :) It was described in such a lovely manner!

I enjoyed reading this but cant help be apprehensive about their reactions afterwards. Cant wait for the next chapter! :)

Thank you so much. I've always been obsessed with rains somehow, so yeah.😊

About their reactions..next chapter :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: appy_12
Wow!

This was beautiful! I love how you give attention to the tiniest details of every little frame!

Well, that is how you become such an amazing writer! :)

Khushi's letting go, Arnav's coming in, and letting her in too.. Nice..

Oh, and I have the same doubt as Rae.. Did they make love?

Thanks you so much. I wonder why everyone seems to think they made love? But really, it was only a kiss, but it would a beginning of a new connection between them.

😊

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: --Siva--
Sona dear! 2nd update for today! 2 PM's from you today! I was shocked to see an update late in night!

The update was breath taking. I didn't know I was holding my breath while reading it. So beautiful. Should I say instead it was heart stopping romantic?

So the bangles that were made by threatening that guy finally found its utmost use, isn't it? I was wondering when he would be giving that to her..

you play with your words especially when it comes to rain and the wet earth scenarios.. And you know, when it rained here, I was thinking of u when I smelt the earth's smell.. Wondering what this would invoke you to write! You made ur impression on me thoroughly..!

So when is she gonna tell the truth??

Thanks much for the PM dear!

Thank you so much, really 😊

And in case you didn't notice, my username is mistyrains 😛

So, I have a thing for rains, and when IPKKND's first promo aired with Barun standing in the rain, leaning against his car, I wanted something like this to happen. I hope I've done justice to it though.

And you thought of me, when it rained? That is so sweet 😃

And about the truth...you will get to know exactly, in the next few updates.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

This was really awesome Unbelievable Arnav the mighty ASR made a cake for Khushi ehmmm it would have been really delicious. That kiss would b a perfect gift 4 Khushi & the way u describe their passionate kiss is really mind blowing👏

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payal.12

@payal.12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

that was so beautiful...😍

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Oh the kiss was so beautiful and sensuous and touching ! And such an apt name to the chapter...it was truly a mixture of fire and ice... Wow the passion was blazing between them!

Love it dear.. And not to say but continue soon, I am sure now it's gonna go very emotional .. With them trying to control their urges and khushi trying to hide the truth!