Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Awww that was such a sweet yet sad update.. I wanted to slap Payal for her careleesly spoken words.. But I love the growing bond between Arnav and Khushi..

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Beautiful and haunting!

I like how he is being more impulsive, and I liked how she acknowledged to herself that she had fallen for him! 😳

The sadness was obvious... And that's what was haunting... But done very well! 😃

The ball/ date.. Now that I am eagerly awaiting for...

Hmmm, Akaash and Payal... More interesting situations! Me like me like!

Thank you for the PM too.

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

loved d update..tht was awesome ...thnks for pm 🤗

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

He wants her...but cant have her

She wants him but knows she lives on borrowed time!

It will break his heart to know she is ill!

😭😭😭

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

"She would leave him, that too, when he didn't even have her" Mannn!! nooo wayyy.. *Wishing that itz not foreshadowing* I sooo don't want Khushi to leave Aranv behing 😭

Awww!!! Arnav laughing 😍...how cute!!

'she too would actually become a memory' -brought tearz to my eyes ): That was just sooo sad!!

hehehe...Arnav scared of askin her to go to the was sooo sweet!! Love how he got all nervouse and blurted it out!! Can't waitt for their date!!! <33

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

liked the part arnav asking for going out😊

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Awesome update!!!

It was kind of sad how you kept on hinting that she is going to die...but then their meeting made up for it...loved how he asked her out,...it reminded me of harry asking cho chang for the yule ball in GOF...he sounded like a teenage boy asking the girl out for the prom!!!it was sooo cute..

Im really happy that heis opening little by little to her...its building their relationship...he loves her eyes...its like he wants her eyes to remain just like he has painted it...always happy and enthusiastic...:)

i really hope this story has a happy ending...:)...lovely update...:)

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Very great job!!

You know when I read this FF at starting stages, I had an impression it is going be one light FF like others.. I was totally wrong, it proved its one unique stuff!

There is a sadness overlapping everywhere except in Arnav alone scenes..!

The sadness is the total color of the FF here..

They both understood they fell for each other but still restricting each other. Wiser!

Ball date! Waiting.

Thanks for the PM dear!

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BlueOrchid

@BlueOrchid

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

It was really good..awsm update..thnks fr the PM..

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#230

oh man..no one should have such fate...to fall in love and then find out that their loved one might not survive...i feel soory for arnav wehn he will fond out bout khushi's sickness...it was just so amazing dear...thnx 4da pm dear...