Rules Of Attraction ( Updated Part 21)- Pg 139

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fire.vs.ice

@fire.vs.ice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

beautifully written!!
" She felt him stiffen beside her.

'No, I want it, for myself. It's like a keepsake, a memory.' "

aww he wants to keep it! how sweet!

waiting for more!

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

it was a touching part yaar :) ... i really liked their entire conversation... how he observes her n the irony of the memories statement... aww that was really heart touching...
i liked payal-khushi convo too
so payal n aakash are getting married ... n now arnav n khushi will be related :P
update soon

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Eleanor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

He is fallen deep for her. He's going to be heartbroken when he finds out about Khushi but I hope he is still there for her. I loved the painting and the memory foreshadowing. Loved it!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Such evocative writing...brilliant. The sadness that permeated through this chapter was heartbreaking.

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Mann! You write so damned beautifully! <3

All of this had a feeling of emptiness to it, you know, like something constantly tugging to your heartstrings, making you go so restless, but still kinda placating you, soothing you!
Yeah, this probably sounds like the worst degree of oxymoron. but that it the way it made me feel! :)

Okay, so anyway, brilliant piece of writing!
And I'm so desperate to read the next part, but I got exams round the corner, and I seriously NEED to study! :P
Will catch up with all your future updates when I get back! :D