About Last Night**THREAD 1**PART 1-15**

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

It was the universal language between husbands and wives for "do absolutely nothing."

"You're changing, Bhai," Akaash said with disbelief. For this compliment, Akaash received a glare...

"Understand this. When you wear the saree of my choosing, it feels like you are wrapped up in me--even when you are across the room, I am touching you, all over..."

It wasn't that she was resisting him; she was resisting herself...She was terrified that without the old established boundaries, she would no longer be able to hide that she was in love with her husband.

Khushi looked up and graced him with a smile that rivaled the sun. "it fits perfectly. I couldn't imagine a more beautiful ring. I love it."

I love it too. Not the ring, which I am sure is beautiful. But ur writing.

So... safely, legally married and all. Now Arnav has to manage & mend his relationship with his wife and reveal how much he loves her in small bits & pieces so that she can take it & believe it. And poor kid, she wants to be intimate with him without revealing how much she loves him.

What fools we mortals are!

Looking forward to reading the next part, my dear M.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Really nice update and you are keeping true to Arnav's character...he will be nice by being all smirky and arrogant. Sigh but thats him.

And I see what you are doing, missy...you, my friend, are dragging the night! *accusing glare*

But its okay cos I am expecting some major ArHi moments in this party which are going to set Creep right. :D

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Great update! Was waiting for it! Thanks for the PM!

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Very beautiful update.

All the dialogues were wonderful and thanks for the PM.

Edited by vidya.sanjay - 13 years ago

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shanthini

@suhanana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

too good. continue soon... thanks for the pm😊

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

It was beautifully written. Be it the part of arnav asking her not to talk or everybody noticing he had changed or arnav wanting to control her or khushi wanting arnav without him knowing she loves him. Fab update. I should seriously take lessons from you to give regular updates. Thanks for the pm.

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

😊Your writing is great. Love how you are weaving this story. Please continue soon. Thanks for the PM.😊

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Oh Wow. that was just incredible!

It was the universal language between husbands and wives for "do absolutely nothing."

True- very, very true.

"Understand this.When you wear the saree of my choosing, it feels like you are wrapped up in me--even when you are across the room, I am touching you, all over..."

Hotness! Ooof I actually had to go and sit in the cooler after that one!😆

But, it wasn't that, Khushi realized. Her eyes met her reflection in the mirror and she covered her hot cheeks with her palms. It wasn't that she was resisting him; she was resisting herself. If she let Arnav Singh Raizada have this, would she let him have everything? She was afraid. There was no more six-month clause to hold her back. There was a proper marriage. There was no more I-hate-you. There was I-desire-you. She was terrified that without the old established boundaries, she would no longer be able to hide that she was in love with her husband.

Why do I feel Khushi's going to start playing him at his own game? I don't think our feisty tigress will give in to her husband's possessiveness just like that- they're quite a pair- aren't they?

Absolutely fantabulously fantastically written! that was good! I loved Arnav's way of thinking- and I even laughed out loud- he thinks he can control her?! I think someone needs to tell him that he's already kicked out all the peace from this lifetime! 😆

Loved his possessiveness and need to have her near him at all times- again- beautifully portrayed hon!

Keep writing! and thanks for the PM!

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s2612

@s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#639

grt update...your writing has brought the story more alive...
thanks for pm...continue soon!!!

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#640

That was lovely .. 😊 . so beautifully written 👏 👏 Arnav still being Arnav , so controlling, even after giving her engagement ring and doing all the paperwork for legitimize their marriage 😍 but still cant let his guard down 🤔 . Thats how his character is shown in the serial too . ( remember bhang confession ) 😉 even after remembering pouring his heart out to Khushi he still behaved as nothing happened . Hats off to you for writing it so well . 👏👏