About Last Night**THREAD 1**PART 1-15**

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nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

wow...

everytime your work makes me happy...i jus love it...beautifully written...i can feel the tension between them...i just love this tension...

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

wow this is simply amazing!!! i love how they understand each other... her doing things that will please him and yet not quite sure of their new relationship, his frustration and yet the vocalisation of his thoughts... just wonderful... they are sooo jittery and yet sooo cute... like they r falling in love again :D

Thanks for the PM... looking forward to the next update :D

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devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

loved it

beautifully written wow so well arnav manages khushi awesome part 😉

dialogue of arnav was superb u caught me with that one 😃

cont soon dear

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689471

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Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Lovely update, your writing skills are amazing😃

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mcguiness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#655

awesome. ur writing skills are excellent. thanks for the update and pm

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PinkPari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

I love how you explain every feeling and sensation slowly and don't rush through it! It makes everything feel 10 times more sensual hehe 😆 I seriously love this story! Love how Arnav isn't pushy and does small but significant things to make her feel special!

You are a very talented writer and please continue! (Just a tiny request😊 I know you're the writer, but please don't rush to bring the consummation scene *ahem* 😆. I love the slow, sensual pace and it just makes the sexual tension even more unbearable so when they finally show their love sparks will be flying all over the place!!)

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#657

aww...
that was awesome...

loved arnav's comment about the saree..

will look forward for the next part..

continue soon...

many thanks for the pm..:)

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manusmithcl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

loved it...you should really pursue writing as profession..

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#659

i LOVED THE UPDATE... so beautifully written ... from arnav's control to take things slow so that she believe it to khushi's struggle for her feeling for him... she loves him so much that she wants to be with him all time... how sweet... looking for this party