About Last Night**THREAD 1**PART 1-15**

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

First of all,thanks for the PM!

I was probably as dazed,if not more, as Khushi was when Arnav bit her ear lobe,while I was reading this update.

The reason Arnav gave for the saree,so,so romantic!

I loved the last part! I'm so glad Khushi admitted that she loved the ring without any hesitation!

Continue soon,m hooked onto this!

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

Just a few minor typos here and there. Apart from that, amazing writing.

Could be one of the best fan fics I've read on this site. Perfectly true to their characters. Now, if only Khushi would show some spunk and take the lead!

And about the *ahem* hot moments, very well written and alarmingly sensual.

I wish this site had a *subscribe* function where I could get updates on this thread and writers didn't have to PM people!😡

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

My feelings ryt now r exactly wot u wrote in d end "i cudnt imagine a more beautiful update. I love it"...

As someone has olready mentioned...i need 2 updates a day now..one in morning one at night lol

P.S love u muahhh[I][/I]

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

nice part dear
plz continue soon

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

aww such a cute update!!! this is just beautiful!! THIS was suppose to happen in the show!! damn! :) beautifuL!!

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#646

nyc update...n i luved it...thnx for pm😊😊😊

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Awww loved it :) thanks for the pm 😊 u rock update soon :)

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. Aww, she wore the bangles he gave her and she loves his ring. That was so sweet.

It was beautiful.

Can't wait to read more.

Continue soon. Thanks.😊

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

"When you wear the saree of my choosing, it feels like you are wrapped up in me--even when you are across the room, I am touching you, all over..."

GOOD LORD! How do you come up with these? This took me to an unbearable level of sexy. Did they really have to go to that engagement? God, they are still in the house, right? so maybe you could change things a little and they could, you know, NOT appear at the stupid mehra's engagement? Not that i'm desperate or anything, just excited ;)

extremely sexy update, continue soon =D (could you instead of tomorrow, update the next part today?)

hehe

thanks for the pm :)

cheers

sonia