About Last Night**THREAD 1**PART 1-15**

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

How clever :-)... short and sweet update!!

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@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Clever as they come...huh? Poor Khushi...has she been duped again...even if it fir the best? Do or will the end justify the means...? Interesting!!😉

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Aww feel bad for Khushi but then again feel so happy cause now there officially married. LOL I wish i was wearing that engagement ring! Anyways loved the update!

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DGill28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Arnav is such a scheming guy! I can't believe he actually turned the whole proposal onto Khushi and he didn't even reveal that he loves her. However, i'm trusting your judgement and you know what you have planned as the for the bigger picture. Well, at least they are finally officially married. Great update!

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

oh man!! i just read it completely!! and this is such a beautiful cute simple smooth and amazingly good FF/SS!!!
LOveED it !!! i have sooo much to say about this i loved but right now all i can feel is happiness!! and so unable to write a proper comment for this superb FF.

the last para of all the 10 chapters- not only did they remove the 6months clause but also she proposed!! MAN!! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by asumi - 13 years ago

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

that was wonderful... i love this story :D thanks for the PM :D

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Parker27

@Parker27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Finally he got her a ring. I really like how u included this aspect of their relation. And loved the last 3 lines. waiting for ur next update.

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

' Her skin, dewy radiance; her beautiful mouth, glossy temptation. It was impossible to believe that this was the same tigress who had emptied a pail of water on him earlier this week. Arnav smiled inwardly. The afternoon was not over--he may be doused yet.'

I so wish I could write like this...sheer magic.

And Khushi proposing marriage to Arnav...stroke of brilliance...