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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

oh man she left him please continue

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

This is wonderful i adore the clarity you write with!!

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Oh gosh! U had me fooled til the end, hoping there would be a happy ending, but sometimes, a girl just needs to leave! And it takes a strong person to do that, Khushi is! Im proud of her! Lovely OS!

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Tahreem

@Angel-Girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

I least expected that she was gonna leave after all this

but she did =[

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

That was great loved it beautiful aww shes leaving him nooo what about that beautiful moment they had how are you kushi goona forget that she will never will forget it arnav get her back. Loved it thanks for the pm. [:)

Edited by shyperson - 13 years ago

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rozina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Harshuuu what an amazing treat on a crappy monday this OS was! I was having a total crap day and man i was so grumpy until i checked my inbox and tadaaa there was an amazing, hot, passionate heart wrenching OS!

It was totally mindblowing harshu and i have been waiting for you to write one of your besharam OS for a while! My wish came true! okay im blabbering but its midnight here and im falling asleep at my laptop!

"She forgot all the hurt, the pain, the ache this man had caused in her life, and at that moment, he was the man whom she had loved more than her life. Whom she still loved, with all the pieces of her broken heart. Whom she would love until her end" this was such an amazing paragraph on your OS harshu i was like wow when i read it! You are an amazing writer harshu! You can write in so many different styles it amazes me!

I actually loved the ending because it gives us insight on how khushi left things with arnav! Ive been reading the FF and i was presuming khushi left arnav on really bad terms! It must have been so much worse for him waking up to find khushi missing!

Loved loved loved loved it harshu!!!! Know i defo need an update on never gone never far!!!!!

rozi

xxx

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Damn, after all that she had to leave him!!

Really nice update!!

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689471

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Loved your OS, it was really good😊

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

You say mature n i run fast!!!...n smelled ANGST too!!!
loved it...it was sweet yet painful ..(no pun there😳)
u wrote it beautifully.

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: 18shabbo
<font color="#CC0000"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">You say mature n i run fast!!!...n smelled ANGST too!!!
loved it...it was sweet yet painful ..(no pun there😳)
u wrote it beautifully.
</font></font>

Thanks hun.. :)

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