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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Superb work !!!!! Amazingly written !!!!!!
Awww she left !!!!
Bring her back soon !!!!!
Thnx for the pm !!!

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Harsh...it's just wonderful.And It was sad too.But, it had to end this way for her to be strong. And for him to redeem himself.

Hope to see how he wins her back.

Ash.

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

khushi hun, when a scrumptious ASR says i luv u, u dt just turn away; u get back under the covers n enjoy it to the max!!!!! 😉

LOL!☺️

Enjoyed that "puddle of goo" part...🤪 it's such a crazy expression n i luv it!

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Oh no ... she's leaving!!! that's so sad... but maybe he did declare his love for her too LATE... great OS :D thanks for the PM

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Naillah_k

@Naillah_k

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Really well written!!! bt she left him after this hw sad

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255319

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Good updates... Please continues soon 😊

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

This left me speechless...it was beautiful...even though the ending was sad...I still loved it...

Thanks a ton !!!!

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

omg..this is awesome...very well written
thanks for the pm

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

👏👏thank you...great jopb...brilliant..amazing...👏👏

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

very very nice and ☺️ u know

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