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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
ok awesome upfatye
cant wait for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Awesome update...!!!
this sounds sooo mysterious...!!!
can't wait to read more...
plz do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Great update
but it was sad "/
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Very interesting! Please cont. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 3:Misunderstanding

Heglared at her for the last time with the same questioning hurt eyes. Knowing she wouldn't utter a word in front of him,he exited as kushis Ma said.His fist rolled up in a ball.He felt weakness embracing him second by second.

The rain poor down on him hard,He looked up at the night sky, wanting to see someone next to him, searching for someone above.He was out raged on what hid seen, heard.
knowing he would be the one to ruin his sisters life , because of shayam.

He searched for answers just as the night when he Kicked her out of Raizadas Mansion,not wanting to no her side of the story.Not wanting to face up anymore, Or didnt have the face to face her,After discovering the pregnancy papers.


FLASH BACK

He stood there shock, The voices around him mocking him on his misbehavior.He hated himself on his actions.

His eyes were crying tears of blood. His mouth wanting to speak a word, question himself , but new their was nothing to question for.That night he destroyed everything in his path, not caring in such little things compared the the treasures of his life, now lost.

The joy rising in his heart was endless, A baby girl just his and kushi's.Hid made a promise to himself long before, he would never be a father like his father was.Hid give love care and even more to his family.Showing them their was or is no such thing as pain in this world.

His dreams of all he wonted would all be fore filled to his loving and beautiful child and a wife that meant the world.His child held half of his life, and the mother of His child held the other.But now what hid had done regretting on so much.

A knock approached from the door, A hope rising in his heart

Kushi.

no salee sab , the man who has destroyed his sisters dreams her life her hope was now standing in front of him, The man that created only hate between the women he only lived for , that shattered everything , or what ever was left , the happiness ,was now embraced with dark and cold.


He took steady steps towards him, what the hell do you wont shyam said in a low dangerous voice.He was in no mood.Arnav tried to exited from the door, he needed kushi at this point, and now he wouldn't make a mistake in his life that would just be left in regret.

He proceeded towards the door, only to be stopped by shayam.
Where are you going Arnav, The women, Kushi, he explained , you supposedly think is in love with you Is a lie, he gasped.Arnav spat on his flesh, Shut up dammed, he made slow steady steps before knowing he was knocked out from the head.


Dont U even say my wife's name with your dirty mouth he roared.Arnav smashed shayms back against the hard cold wall.Making pain oozing out.His nose splashed in blood He punched him for the last time on the gut.

You stay away from kushi and My child and nor would U ever make a mistake on hurting my sister he roared.

knowing he was half unconscious but he managed to spit out hateful and disgusted words.A smiled crept upon his face,what child he gasped, what wife.

Arnav looked at him confused, what do Mean what child, The child that is yet to come from kushi.

He layed out a loud roar , the child your thinking of , belongs to Shyam Manor Jha. silence awoke in the room, he was died shocked.


Dont you dare even say that,arnav smashed his face for that last time.
He was confused, hurt .Dont , dont u even-
Arnav, i told you before and yet again im telling u, U can not come between me and kushi. She loves me and I love her, She My life he dribbled out.


This Child Is my'n and kushi's.This child will be defiantly born from kushi, but will have the blood inside im of Shayam Manor Jha he shouted.And by that he exited out the door, leaving a hurt arnav, he turned aorund for the last time, a dangerous smirk forming on his lip, A glimps of disgust in eyes.

FLASH BACK OVER

He let out a roar, Kushi !!
tears rolling constantly from his numb eyes, Having no more strength hee collapsed down.Was that night nothing for her?, was is just a use of my emotions he questioned,A aching heart now in a million pieces.

Now, he wonted answers which he would get...

Edited by HiraHasan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awesome 👏
pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Aarrggghhh...!!! 😡 I hate tat creepwa Jha...!!!
How dare he...!!! 😡
My Poor Arnav...😭
Sad update... yet beautiful...😭
Loved it...
Plz do continue soon...
Thanx a lot for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
ugh that snake putting lies into arnav's head
poor arnav
awesome update...it was beautifully written
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
OMG I literally hate that shyam! Please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
its not fair yaar...how could he even think that khushi could dod some thing like that give arnav some brain yaar...unlike in the show this MU is worsr yaar...

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