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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just came across this one.. Just loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dtwas funny +romantic..:Pi thot sumthing wud happn in d end,,bt dtdint happen..lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee 😆
naughty cockroach 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Omoraboti: Nyc OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Farah,
I just loved it. You are such a good writer. I love the way you set the whole scene. I was visualizing the entire OS. If only we could have seen something like this on the serial but offcourse not the x-rated version but the pg-13 version. thanks for sharing with us. Now that the show is off the air I am glad we have writers like you who are helping IPK addicts like me to get our daily fixes. Keep writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan

Farah,

I just loved it.You are such a good writer. I love the way you set the whole scene. I was visualizing the entire OS. If only we could have seen something like this on the serial but offcourse not the x-rated version but the pg-13 version. thanks for sharing with us. Now that the show is off the air I am glad we have writers like you who are helping IPK addicts like me to get our daily fixes. Keep writing.



Rashmi!!

I just noticed you commented here. Thank you, dear. It was my first piece and when I read it now I cannot get past the mistakes. 😆

They could have given us so much more, naa? Even after they wete hsppily married?

PS: You had me at the pg 13 suggestion! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! This was totally wowww!! I read it last night when my mind had stopped working because of studying for exams and after reading it, I felt so refreshed! 😆😆

I could never imagine that a cockroch could do so much..😳
Seriously, Hats off to your imagination. 😉

And it was so well-written. I was totally into the story while reading it.😃

Loved it! It was swesome! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sakshi.

OMG! This was totally wowww!! I read it last night when my mind had stopped working because of studying for exams and after reading it, I felt so refreshed! 😆😆

I could never imagine that a cockroch could do so much..😳
Seriously, Hats off to your imagination. 😉

And it was so well-written. I was totally into the story while reading it.😃

Loved it! It was swesome! ❤️

I see you have been reading my one-shots. 😆
LOL .. this is my first piece. It took me a lot courage to post this OS in the forum. But the readers gave me huge moral support once I posted it. I was even new to this forum then. That's why I always am thankful to the wonderful readers .. else my story-writing would have ended with the first part of this OS. 😊
I mysefl have many interesting stories with cockroach .. nothing like this thought! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Omoraboti

I see you have been reading my one-shots. 😆
LOL .. this is my first piece. It took me a lot courage to post this OS in the forum. But the readers gave me huge moral support once I posted it. I was even new to this forum then. That's why I always am thankful to the wonderful readers .. else my story-writing would have ended with the first part of this OS. 😊
I mysefl have many interesting stories with cockroach .. nothing like this thought! 😆


Hahahaha! LOL!😆😆

And this was your first one?😲

But this one was damm amazing! 😳 I was so frustrated since morning and I just wanted to read something..and I realised I haven't read your one-shots. So just read them😉 and I re-read this one. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .sakshi.


Hahahaha! LOL!😆😆

And this was your first one?😲

But this one was damm amazing! 😳 I was so frustrated since morning and I just wanted to read something..and I realised I haven't read your one-shots. So just read them😉 and I re-read this one. :)

Too many typos! Arggh ..
Hope you are feeling better now. 😊 Happy to be of some use to you!

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