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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome . . . . . Kash ye sab D3 me bhi ho pata . . . . Smriti ghai slapping shivam. . . . . . & rey realizing the truth... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nice do pm me 4 ur next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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small update... but good one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UPDATE 6:

But how was he supposed to get her back? After that last call,Kriya had changed her cell number. Her mom had completed the documentations and returned to Dehradun and he didn't even have her number. How could he have been such a blistering idiot? Now where the hell will he find out where to contact her? Facebook,he thought! Of course!Ek teenager ke liye Facebook kya hai, yeh tum kya jaano Ramesh babu? He quicly logged in and went straight to his friend list. But she wasn't there? Heights of pretence,he thought. Even unfriended me on Facebook? He checked on Swayam's friend list...she wasn't there. He checked on every Louisan she was Facebook friends with, but no avail. She must have wanted to forget St. Louis,he thought. He checked on most of her old friends lists...but she wasn't there too! She had deleted her account. He couldn't think why she took SUCH drastic measures. He was pisse doff again. he didn't even know her Dehradun address,or he would've hopped on to the latest train,he swore. He was really pissed off.
Suddenly his dad came in front of him. Rey:Dad? Dad: Hi Rey. Tumhi se baat karne aa raha tha.
Rey: Itne dino tak toh baat nahi ki ab kaise yaad aayi meri?
Actually Reyaansh's father was a big buisness tycoon. In earlier years he used to spend lots of time with his family but now he was so busy that he hardly talked to them. rey was very close to his dad but time had done them apart. earlier Rey's father was aware of Rey's every like and dislike - everything that went on in Rey's life but now he barely knew Rey's best friends' names.
Dad: Rey I know main tumse baat nahi kar paata hu aajkal and I'm really sorry...Accha lets make up for this today. Father-son time. Only me and you. Your secrets - safe with me. you tell me about your life - I listen and give feedback.
Rey cheered up a little.
Rey: Kuch khaas nahi dad. I'm a bit down.
Dad: Rey kuch hua kya?' I'm a bit down' doest not suit you. Is there a problem? Feel free to share it with me.
Rey: No dad, khamokha aap bhi pareshan ho jaaoge.
Dad: Agar bete ko problems ke saath help karne ko pareshani kehte hai toh main nahi jaanta baap-bete ka relation kyaa hota hai.
Rey merely shrugged.
Dad: Koi ladki ki wajah se hai kya? Rey,main bhi teenage life jee chuka hu.
Rey knew there was no hiding this from Dad. He told him everything about Kriya.
Dad: So you found out that the girl was actually loyal to you and she sacrificed everything so that you don't feel as bad as you would have had you known the truth. Hmm...sabse best logo ke saath hi sabse buri cheeze hoti hai. You know Rey...you may be feeling that life has been hard on you, but trust me the apin Kriya must have gone through must have been thousands of more times painful. The only person lfe has been unfair is to her.
Rey: Hmmm...
Dad: But Rey ek baat batau? Life mein bahut si aisi cheeze hoti hai - over which we have no control. Hum chahte hue bhi nahi rok sakte hai in cheezo ko. Aur life mein hum kuch aur hi sochte hai- but turns out life ne kuch aur hi chaha tha humare liye. But you know the best thing we can do after that?
Rey: What?
Dad: Move on.
Rey: How am I supposed to move on exactly? I won't be able to live without her!
Dad: Rey I am going to give you a challenge- you will have to complete it.
Rey: Par Dad...
Dad: Rey - maine tumhe ab tak jitne challenges diya hai - you completed right? Class nine mein football team ka captain banne ka. Western Dance National championships mein gold medal. Voh bhi ek nahi teen. Class ten boards mein school top karna. Class twelve boards mein 95% laana. St Louis mein admisson paan. Yeh bhi karoge na?
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So how did you like this part? I toh loved it. And next update's gonna be super-exciting! I thought I was getting a little predictable...but ab toh in dono ko dhaansu ,thriller,tear-evoking love-story se milvaaungi...Please comment!
Edited by kriyanshlove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
update was nice but rey ke dad kya challenge denge m afraid now ye to nahi kahenge ki he has to move on plz plz aise math karo...

nd thnkx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Move on only wid kria.. Awesum update.. Update nxt part fast.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Awesome update...luvd it...bt wats d challenge...update nxt part soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!!
awww luved the dad-son convo
im wondering wat would b rey's dad's challenge
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm sure rey's dad gonna challenge him to get her back . . . .

but plz bechare ke liye kuch rasta zarur bana dena 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...
i hope that the challenge is to get kriya back...
please update soon aqnd pm me...xxx

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