Kriyaansh - Realisation (update 7: page 15)

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Asha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

lovely ff... plzz continue n pm me =)

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

UPDATE 4:

Sharon: What the hell? Location-beating kyu de raha hai?...NO WAIT,WAIT LAG GAYA!

Dehradun:

Kriya checks caller-ID. When she notices Ry is calling,she quickly wipes her tears and picks up the phone.

Kriya: Rey?Rey aap ab bhi...I told you mujhe koi relation nahi chaahiye aap ke saath.

Sharon:(puts it on speaker mode) Kriya...?

Kriya: Oh!Sharon...aap ko bhi bata diya uss Rey ne.

Rey:(whispering) See?

Sharon:(glares at him) Kriya location beating kyu de raha ha network?

Kriya: Of-course,main DEHRADUN ME HU. And I won't come back ever. And I don't wanna talk to you LOSERS.

Sharon: Kriya...

Kriya: Please Sharon!

Sharon: Kriya,for god sake,stop pretending. Tumhe kya lagta hai. mai,mai stupid hu? I know something is bugging you. Achaanak se Rey se break-up,koi reason nahi,tumhara college chodna,Dehradun...What the hell is going on???

Kriya:(breaks down) Sharon,are you the only one on the line?

Sharon: Y...Yeah,of course.

Kriya: Sharon,...Maa ko pata chal gaya that I was dancing. And starting se unhe Rey nahi pasand the. So,Footloose mein participate karne ke liye unhone shart rakhi...

Sharon: Go on.

Kriya: Ki main Rey se apni dosti hamesha ke liye tod doon,aur...voh meri last performance hogi..and pre-valentine night par she got to know ki Rey aaye the...aur unhone..(cries)

Sharon: I- I can understand.

Suddenly Shivam enters the canteen.

Shivam: Loser-gang!

Sharon: What the hell you c***!

Shivam: Ab mujhe chain aaya uss Kriya ko uss ke bodyguard se door karke...(laughs)

Rey: What do you mean?

Shivam: Just gave a call to her mother...Jinhe maine already impress kar diya tha...End of that chudail's dancing-career (evil laugh)

Kriya's mom (KM) enters.

Rey: Rani-Lakshm...sorry...

KM: Beta,sorry toh mujhe kehna chaahiye... Galti meri thi joh maine iski baat (looks at Shivam)

She steps up gives him a tight slap.

KM: How dare you? Ek sapna tha uska...meri phool si bacchi...

Swayam: Pyaar ek baar hua tha usse. Voh bhi cheen liya. Just GET LOST!

Shivam: After this insult of course I will!

Shivam walks out.

(to be contd.)

So how did you like my surprise?A little cliche I know...But do comment!For PMs add me as a buddy. PMs on their way!

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome...wow shivam getting slap from kriya's mom...update the next part soon

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florine_20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

good start yaar.
continue sn.pm me

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Asha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

loved the surprise... n even luved the update...

Sivam getting slapped.. that too from rani laxmi bai...🤢

lovely😊

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Tanushree Dutta

@kriyanshlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

UPDATE 5:

Rey was feeling restless so he walked out. He couldn't believe what wvwryone was saying. No, he had reached that point in life where he could make out between truth and lies.

At home,he tuned on the radio. The song started playing.

(Enclosing lyrics so please listen while reading to get the feel:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXu8slfJK0w)

I can be tough
I can be strong
But with you
It's not like that at all
There's a girl
That gives a shit
Behind this wall
You just walked through it

He recalled the night Kriay dumped him.

And I remember all those crazy things you said
You left them running through my head
You're always there, you're everywhere
But right now I wish you were here.
All those crazy things we did
Didn't think about it, just went with it
You're always there, you're everywhere
But right now I wish you were here

He remembered his happier days with Kriya.

Damn, Damn, Damn,
What I'd do to have you
Here, here, here
I wish you were here.
Damn, Damn, Damn
What I'd do to have you
Near, near, near
I wish you were here.

He couldn't help but believe Kriya now.

The way you are
It's who I am
Don't have to try hard
We always say
Say it like it is
And the truth
Is that I really mi-I-iss

The truth was she was missed.

All those crazy things you said (things you said)
You left them running through my head (through my head)
You're always there, you're everywhere
But right now I wish you were here.
All those crazy things we did (things we did)
Didn't think about it, just went with it (went with it)
You're always there, you're everywhere
But right now I wish you were here

That was it - he had to believe her. She was to be trusted.

Damn, Damn, Damn,
What I'd do to have you
Here, here, here
I wish you were here.
Damn, Damn, Damn
What I'd do to have you
Near, near, near
I wish you were here.

He had to get her back. She was his - only his. His baatcutter.

'Thankyou Avril',he whispered.

So guys,here goes. personally I too was a wee bit disappointed,but care to comment. I promise next time would be better!