DOSTI VS PYAAR - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
This was a really nice update ! Continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
haaye !yeh suspense jaan nikaal degi mera!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago

woow great work ..
der cum mys hero..
sameer such an jerk ..
nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rahul found janvi in his arms, she carried him and safely placed her in his car, where rohit was awaiting for his dear brother, rahul drived the car so fast for sameer shouldnt find them but rahul didnt see sameer not even once...
he reached a hospital, though its late night, they have offered her emergency treatment, physically she became alright but mentally she was totally upset so she didnt reach her conscious...rahul phoned krish and informed him abt everything. He didnt want to leave janvi alone there but as rohit was along with him the whole night without food and sleep he was tempted to leave the place..he came near the room where janvi was admitted and gazed at her through the door..she was lying helpless with bandages...but still he could remember the fear which he saw in her eyes while sameer was chasing her...he was proud of himself that he saved her...he felt happy...he waited there for few more hours...it was morning...calls on calls started ringing in the mobile...rohit was sleeping in the chair and rahul was still awake..rohit got up, rahul could find his hunger, so he requested the nurse to take care of janvi...and left to a restaurant to have breakfast...
krish entered the hospital, and he enquired abt janvi in the reception, then he reached her room where janvi was slowly getting conscious and opening her eyes...and she could find krish standing in front of her...
krish...
hey janu...whats the hell??? why i m seeing u in this situation????
i...m...sorry
sorry???? but why????
i made a very big mistake da...
wat do u mean to say????
janvi explained everything abt sameer to krish and tears rolled down from her eyes...krish stood still without any response...janvi holded his hand, "krish...i m reallly sorry...i could have informed abt this to u earlier...but??"
wat but??? dont say any excuses, if anything happened to u???how can i answer to ur dad???
but krish if dad comes to know abt this...????
dont worry i didnt inform him abt this...we'll somehow manage...
thanks...
and ha...whos that who hav phoned me and informed abt u??? and he hav signed as ur guardian for ur treatment???
s he only really guarded me...
who is that????
dont know but i saw his selfless eyes which helped me from a big danger...
u didnt see him???
ya i didnt see him, it was full of dark...and i was hurt and bleeding...and sameer...that rascal was chasing me...she started crying again..
k u rest for a while,...i will meet the doctor and come...
krish left her room...
(in restaurant)
rohit i m sorry...i think i hav troubled u a lot..
no bhaiya...nothing lik that...really i m very proud of u...i m very happy...hats off to ur selflessness...
k eat soon...u'll be very hungry...
ya of course...u too have urs...
but rahul couldnt eat a single spoon of food coz he was very much worried for janvi...and he received a call from his home...it was his mom...
hello ma...
hello rahul...where were u the last night??? where are u now??? why didnt u come home??? is there any problem??? r u ppl alright??? why didnt u attend the phone since last night??? answer me rahul...is rohit along wit u???
ma ma ma...we r alright...no prob...
reach home soon beta...
his dad got the phone from his mom and he also asked him to return home soon...
rahul started the car from the restaurant and his mind was driven towards janvi...but he has to obey his dad's words, so he reached home half hearted...
they reached home...and his mom was shocked to see his shirt blood filled...his mom asked numerous questions to them...rohit convinced her and told her what happened last night...rahul went to his room and removed his shirt to bath...he threw the shirt in the tub...then he glanced at it once and went back and took the shirt in his hand and kept it safe inside his wardrobe...
then he went to bath...but janvi's thoughts was haunting him like anything...her eyes was disturbing him a lot...he was very much worried at her helpless condition...he wished to be with her...the arms which took her wished to care for her more...he could find himself falling for her...first impression was the best impression...she glued in his heart...she fell in his arms but actually the truth was she fell in his heart and his life too...rahul was behaving odd and he recognized that he had fallen in love with her...
COMING UP: JANVI'S THOUGHTS
[GUYS I MADE A CONFUSION NA...THE INCIDENT HAPPENED IN DELHI NOT IN MUMBAI...THAT IS ROHIT CAME TO SEE HIS MOM AND RAHUL AND ROHIT WENT FOR SHOPPING THERE ONLY...SORRY FOR THE CONFUSION...]
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATED PART 17 GUYS,...WILL SEND U PMS, AFTER WRITING THE FIRST PART OF MY NEW FF DEATHPRINTS...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Krish went from janvi's room and went to see doctor...and janvi was drowned in her self thoughts...she closed her eyes slowly...and the eyes which saved her from the danger came in front...she suddenly opened the eyes...she began to think abt him...i have to thank him...she said to herself...wat a selflessness! why should he help me? why should he save me? what is the purpose??? nothing...but he helped me...he saved me...i am alive because of him..thanks...hats off to his selflessness...i have no words...my ram had sent him...thanks a lot...wat a character he had????...i have to meet him...
her conscious suddenly jumped from inside and started saying "hav to meet him???? but for wat janvi??? what r u doing??? return to ur conscience...does his eyes haunting u??? r u in love with him...does ur words only had gratitude???i dont think so...u r falling in love with him...why do u lose ur self control...be in limits janvi.. be in limits...what a mean character u has? u r attracted towards a person who helped u without any purpose??? how base u are??? will ur ram accept this injustice??? why do u behave in such a low manner??? does ur education taught this?? r ur valuable friendship taught this?? did ur parents send u here for loving anyone??? u r breaking their belief...u r cheating them...
no...no...i dont love him...i dont...
Krish entered the room...
what happened??? why did u shout???
nothing...leave that...when will i get discharged??? what doctor said...
he said nothing serious...its a normal injury only...u can take treatment being in ur hostel..
k...
and u can get discharged tomorrow...now take rest...
(the next day)
hi janu...krish entered the room...
hi krish...
how do u feel now???
ya i m alright...but i feel little tired coz of medicines...
it'll be fine soon...
ya lets leave...
Janvi signed in the register and she was persisted to ask his name in the reception but she didnt...then krish and janvi left from the hospital...
krish was driving the car, and janvi sat aside...and she found krish was not going to her ladies hostel...
hey, krish, where r u going??? this is not the right way...
i m going in the right way only...
what do u mean??
u r not going to stay in the ladies hostel here afterwards..
then???????
in college hostel...
but...
no buts...u have to stay there only...
dont u hav faith in me????
i dont...i mean i dont believe this society...it is safer to be in ur college hostel...
k...as u wish..
thats good...
Leaving janvi in her college hostel he went to dehra dun...
janvi was busy in her studies...
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One fine day, in rahul's home, everyone was moving randomly busy with their work...it was rahul's birthday...and rahul came down from his room, quiet, cute and handsome...
His dad and mom was waiting for him, he came near them and got their blessings, and his dad gave two plane tickets in his hand...he wondered why is he giving this????
then his dad continued," today we r going to mumbai...u hav a surprise there beta..."
He agreed, headed to mumbai and reached mumbai within few hours...
Then his dad and rahul reached a place which located in the city...
rahul, wat do u think abt this building?
its construction is just fabulous dad...i think its an administrative office...
u r right beta...come in...
Rahul still couldnt understand what his dad is doing...when they entered inside everyone wished them... and his dad took rahul to a cabin where everyone have gathered...He made Rahul to sit in the chair where he found a name board written
" Mr. S. Rahul Choudhary
Managing Director"
he was surprised...his dad continued " YOU r the managing director of this company beta...its completely under ur control...this is my gift...the work has been going on since years...i wished to offer u this post a long back...but now its the right time...i know u dont wish to work under anyone... and i too dont wish to give up my post to anyone(laughs)...so i gave my branch to u...u have a big responsibility beta...u hav the capacity too...i know u can do it...all the best beta..."
Thanks papa...
U have another surprise too...come with me...
Sitaram choudhary took rahul to a decorated bungalow where his brother rohit, his elder brother siddharth, his mom's sister and all his relatives have gathered...then his dad said it was a separate house built for him in mumbai...
he was dumb founded because it was completely built in his taste and his birthday went very well but he missed his love with him...
COMING UP: RAHUL'S DEEDS TO FIND HIS LOVE JANVI
Edited by JANAGI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its so nice i like it so nice well writen buddy update asap!! :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
AB AYEGAA MAZAA,JAB JAANU KO USKA RAJKUMAR!😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg 2 parts

awsome dear

cont asap😊


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