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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME😊
LIVED IT
CONT SOON 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow what an update janagi...👏
keep it up dear...😃..very fast fast updating😃love d whole part😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely...waiting for d next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
frnd...😛
4 Pming Me...😃
really updates...😳
ur updates...👏
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
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NOTE: My Exam will start from 1st June so guys...me can't comment on time...but keep Pming me when me'll get time'll commented on ur updates..
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI FRIENDS, before u throw ur sandals, tomatoes and eggs on me.., i m really sorry sorry sorry, i know i m very very late, but i m extremely sorry, so busy wit my new 12th class, a long days my pm came into ur inbox right???? thats it and i stopped in an interesting situation(hope so😆) of my ff, ya its time rahul and janvi's first meet, hope u lik it guys...so let me stop my bla bla first...here's the update yaar...plz forgive me...read my ff, click like button,...and comment plz as it means a lot to me...

Janvi decided to meet that mysterious guy, she didn't inform this matter to any one

At the same time, Rahul came to Mumbai on the same day who came to leave rohit there who had left Mumbai to see his mom

They reached home and went out for shopping for the same plaza but they started late from home.

Janvi went to the plaza and was waiting for Mr. X, it was exactly 7 and the time rolled to 7.30, 8, 8.30.. an omni van came with high speed and it stopped in front of janvi and the door opened wit high force.

She spelled SAMEER

The man who was inside kept a cloth with chloroform in her mouth, as she smelled it she fainted and fell down, and then he took her inside the van.

After an hour she slowly opened her eyes and found her wrapped with rope and was in a booth bungalow, she shouted first and then the man who kidnapped her came in front of her, it was sameer who was her old friend when she was in school.

Sameer...

No dear...it's me your Mr. X

MR. X??😲😲

S Dear,.i am the one.

But y u kidnapped me? Wats the purpose of talking to me like an unknown person?

There is a reason baby!

Wat??????

I NEED U BABE.

Wat do u mean????

I N E E D U

Do u feel ashamed to ask lik this?

Look!.i don't love u!!but I need u completely...but I could hav spoken to u directly...but krish, the nonsense guy who always disturbed me was with u,...he is my only enemy...and now nobody is there to disturb me baby...

And he came near her to touch her.

She said shit...don't come near me..wat a sort of person u r??? shame on u...

Scold me dear,...I wish to hear ur words

Rascal...leave me r else.???

R else??? U cannot do anything

But I don't want to fulfill my wish in this booth bungalow... I want to make u mine in a palace..we'll get there soon baby...don't worry I'll treat u lik a queen...I'll never harm this beautiful flower...but u hav to cooperate wit me my darling...

Shut up...u'll die coz of me...

Ha ha ha...i haven't desired for another girl in my life other than u...got it..

U rogue...

We will speak abt this later baby,...now come wit me...

He went near her,...unwrapped the rope and he holded her hands and pulled her out of the booth bungalow and he pushed her inside the van...and he was driving the omni., janvi was frightened,..She don't know wat to do at this situation...she closed her eyes and prayed to lord ram, "oh my ram...y u left me helpless lik this??? Plz save me lord...plz come and save me...jai shri ram..."

The OMNI van reached city and stopped in a signal, where rahul and rohit were in their car after finishing their shopping, janvi was crying without raising her voice, she don't know wat to do? She was sincerely praying to lord ram to help her.then suddenly she got an idea, she started to write in car's window with the dust stained in it as "HELP ME" and wrote krish's number below as mirror images so that it is visible to others, while at that moment sameer was busy in his smoking...

Rohit's attention caught it slowly and he showed it to rahul, he noted down the phone no. first, then the traffic was slowly clearing, and vehicles started moving, rahul decided to follow the van and he did so.. sameer started driving the van so fast, and rahul too followed him, they reached the interior city, and it was late night too. Rahul got calls from his home to return home soon but he deterred to follow the vehicle...

And at a certain place, sameer stopped and stepped down to pass urine by roadside. Rahul too stopped at a distance. Janvi decided to use this chance and to escape from him, she could open the door and she started running fast into the dark forest, sameer started chasing her back, now rahul understood the situation very well, he decided to save the girl, he didn't even think for a second he opened the car door and asked rohit to stay there and he too went inside the forest, he searched for more than half an hour, but couldn't find both of them. Then he went still inside and reached an one way path, where he stood still, janvi was running from the dim moonlight facing rahul but she couldn't see him in the dark as she was hurt and bleeding because of sameer's harshness, and as she cried a lot and ran for long time she was very tired, it was a harsh path where she was running in bare foot, janvi came close to rahul, and she was struck by a stone in her path and she fell in front...rahul holded her in his arms and gazed into her innocent face...janvi fainted almost...

coming up: surprise guys...

(i use lot of short forms plz do say if u couldnt follow, i m not a grt writer, iknow as well, plz adjust wit my gramatical mistakes)

NOTE:

guys wat is this?? i m gettin very low response for my works, plz do say me if u don lik , let me stop, i used to respond to all ffs and pms though i don follow the couple but i m gettin no response, inspite of 200 250 pms i m gettin only 20 or 30 likes and comments, plz say me if my pm bothers u so much...😭

Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update 👍🏼




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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it 😊
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a very nice update!!!!!
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