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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

update the next one soin...its like a cliff hanger...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Very sexy. Really liked how you described everything. I tend to have so many characters that is hard to do it sometimes without making the parts longer than they already are. I really liked how you made it just about them and balanced a little bit of family in. Moody ASR is sexy.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

You write beautifully.

I don't mean just the emotion, but also technically. Gorgeous sentences.

'I hope that you get enough sleep as I don't intend to let you sleep tomorrow night and the nights after that', he advised and turned on his side.

Love that line. So quintessentially Arnav.

And, I understand the confusion in Khushi--your writing conveys that she is fearful that if she gives in he will consume her entirely.

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

i like the last line ;) hmm new arnav is nice though he is sure confusing khushi lol

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Paru

@paru_rox

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

I just love this SS and always wait eagerly for any update on this.

Arnav knows Khushi so well right from the empty stomach to her pretending to sleep 😆😆 He also loves confusing his wife so much

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

lovely update.. thanks for the pm...

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

Thanks for the PM. Anyways, great update. It is so Arnav to expect Kushi to know what he is trying to say without having to say it. I like that Kushi is hesitant to admit her feelings at least to him. Can't wait for your next update.

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

Hahaha... Omg, his last line is fantastic! Brilliant update...Loved it! :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

awesomr update naughty arnav and even naughty khushi avoid answers his question loved how he told her to sleep for she won't get any from the next night loved it thanks for the pm