SS: Wooing Khushi: Part 11 updated on Page 147

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

wow it was really good!

and long is good...i like long

hope you write next chapter this long as well

i like the fact that arnav is trying to convience her

as arnav and no asr...nor is he acting too guilty

and saying sorry - he cant become too weak

even if he finds the truth although he wont

act like monster asr but he cant become

too mushy and romantic...and that is something

i like about your story. you still have kept his attitude

yu kept his charater really nice...keep it up :D

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Anya_jain

@Anya_jain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Loved it... Pls update the next part soon..

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Wow amazing , loved it .it was not long enough y did u stop ,pls continue asap. Btw thanks for the pm

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Paru

@paru_rox

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

This is just fantastic 👍🏼 ... Arnav sleeping at poolside since Khushi won't agree...well that's the only way he can get her inside 😉😆😆 ...

Can't wait for the next part 😃

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

I love this!! Its so much like the characters..👍🏼

Thank you so much for the pm!!

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

it was mega goooddd..

love the way arnav is teasing her big time

loved it

thanks for the npm

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

wow that was fantastic!!! loved each bit... but wish he would apologise and let her know why he forced her to marry him etc... and then he can have his fun ;D!!! but awww he is sooo sweet sleeping with her outside :D but since when is he scared of sleeping alone? i thought that was khushi!!! lol please continue soon :D