The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Another lovely update!

Loved the way u are developing their characters.

Wished the CVs read your FF1 :)

Thanks again and please update soon!

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

oh damnit.. it was tooo shorrt.. .. it ended too soon.. and was w8ing for arhi scene.. 😭

neway it was just amazing as usual... loved the way u described khushi's room.. . and the way u described her wearing oversized Tee i can totally imagine it. awww 😳

and lemme guess is dat gal khushi in the last part.. did she fall in love earlier with some random guy?? 😕 and he hurt her not trusting her feelings...!!!

i hope m wrong plzz...!!

ohkay plzz update it ASAP.. and plzzz for God's sake make it a lilttle longer... plzzz 😍

i just w8 for ur updates gargee.. m in love with this FF..khushi's character to be precise... just love ur writing... 🤗

hope to see ur update soon... 😳

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Oh My God! I am loving this story..wonderful angle of the story u have chosen...cant wait to read more..

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

I am so happy since we are so close to 70 meaning another update heading our way 😃

Edited by MairaKhan1180 - 13 years ago

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

This is the first time I have ever commented twice on the same FF in one day!

Just shows how addicted I am to your stories!

Please update soon

PS: When are you updating Second chances? :)))))))))

Edited by coolgal49 - 13 years ago

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

WONDERFULL>>!!!!
LOVED Akash's part like CRAZYY!

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Love...

And it gave you the guts to turn your life upside-down yourself. It made you feel powerful and helpless all at once.

How brilliant is that! You inspired me with those words.

(also love the bit about all the artist tools plus plate of jalebis--hilarious!)

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Don't listen to the people who complain it was short! Write what you like - post what you like.

You captured a lovely moment between Arnav and Khushi - his wonder at how well Khushi can read him - that was really pretty to read

And I love Akash and Payal's little love at first sight relationship - nice contrast to Arnav and Khushi! Thanks for the pm - I look forward to reading more :)