The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

liked it . loved it. absolutely adored it. love the way you tore down the first wall. sheer poetry, that prose was. excellent work, as always!👏👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Haha, love at first sight for a flirt like Akash? Haha, I'm going to guess the last paragraph is Anjali? But I'm probably wrong.

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

I absolutely loved it!! I just finished reading the last two parts...OMG!!!! they were written amazingly...loved how yu wrote his flashback of his mom sooo vivdly!! Damnn girl...yu can write and describe the images sooo well...like for example...how yu portrayed her room...the cieling...the paintings...and then his paintingz...i could have imagined all of it sooo well!! Gosshh...yu know when yu started to write about Akash...instead of Akash..i automatically thought that you wrote Arnav...dont blame me...it just sounds weird when the surname is written for someone else other that ASR & KKG... man...i thought you were talkin about ASR with Payal...i was like wth!...and then i went back...and i was like...ohhh thank god...😳 I love the way yu described what love is...how it brings happiness and sadness at the same time...simply outstanding!! I can't until Arhi encounter <3 Lol...i'll shut up now...yu wanted a long review...and thats the longest that i've written :D

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Updaaate!😃

YESSS PAGE 68🥳

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Updaaate!😃

YESSS PAGE 68🥳

😆😆😆😆 Honey I'm almost ready with the next chapter but I want to put it up on pg 70! So make sure we get there😆

And thank you for the long review- you are a darling!🤗

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: Gargee

😆😆😆😆 Honey I'm almost ready with the next chapter but I want to put it up on pg 70! So make sure we get there😆

And thank you for the long review- you are a darling!🤗

OMG .. i GO edoit my res before you kick me out of here 😳

you are ready .. update kar na yaar

karda na karda na karda na yaar ..

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

this story is getting better day by day

love it

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Let me first tell you that this was going to be my weekend treat. hence the late reply. But then I could not resist and had to read it.

So Mr. Raizada followed Mrs. Raizada and reached his sasural...I simply adore the way you have written this chapter. the descriptions of Khushi's room, her paintings, the emotions caught in Arnav's eye...awesome.

Loved the entry of Payal and Akash too.

And the last part, who was it? Come on...tells us (a la mamiji).

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#439

It feels like Im reading this deep novel, the way you write from different perspectives/point of views, its really interesting & keeps the readers wanting to know more and more...

Coming to the update, it was really beautifully written. Though, I wanted some more ArHi 😆 Actually you did write a very nice piece there but I wanted some dialogues/conversation.. but then again, that you will give us in the next update 😉 It was a nice touch, the way you expressed the feelings, the room and every detail. Everything from Arnavs p.o.v. to Khushis painting to Akash love at first sight..

Hmm but the ending did confuse me. Could it be Khushis sister? =)

Eager to reading some more,
your loyal reader

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 13 years ago