The Life and Lies of Mr and Mrs Shergill-Upd:23/07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Superb ff luved to read this

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: luvAnant
Wow ritch nice read...like the way u write...as i always maintain...u have really got a talent for this dear...Muaah...Tc

Thank you so much Liz! I hope you're not having a problem with the plot, since you haven't followed the show!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: MoNayaLover96
Wow!! It was superbb yaar! But Gunjan's condition was so bad..Felt terrible for her 🥺 But it was so great to see Samrat's protectiveness towards her! Loved how he supported her in all these..He's really a true friend! Loved this update! <3

cont soon. Thanks for PM

Love,
Nila ❤️

Hi Nila!

Thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation! Yes, Gunjan's condition is bad, and she'll remain that way for quite a while, but I assure you that she'll get over it soon! Yes, Sam is very protective of her, and you'll understand why only later on in the fic when Sam's character comes out in the open! But yes, he's a true friend, and can do anything for his Chashmish!

Will be updating in an hour! 😳

Thanks for the comment!

Cheers,

Rit 😃

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -Jen-
OMFG
this was amazing & so LEGIT.
i loveed loved loved it Rit! Sam is so freaking januable<3 HAYEEE! It was so dramatic & thats the best part about it! I loved Bhuis dialogues! They were amazing! Rit, this is the BEST fic I have ever read ❤️ I LOVE IT. I told you it was going to be a big hit & youre like the awesomest writer ever!
EEEKS. Our Mohitpoo is coming back! Khamoshiyan is gonna be the best show ever!!!! =D I wanna know the lead girl is. She better be as hot as Mohit & a good actor & NOT a dehati & have amazing chemistry with him. Juneee COME already!
I LOWE YOU <3 I cant wait for the next update! *muaaah*

Happy Birthday Jenny! 😃 My next update is for you! Yes, I had to give you another surprise today! 😆

Thank you so much for loving the fic! LOL you know how filmy I am, so there has to be that element of drama in my fic naa?! 😉 But thank you for loving her dialogues! Bhui is a difficult character to write, which is why I wasn't too sure about it!

Babeee, wake up and read the latest TB! There's some locha with Khamoshiyan! All said and done, I just hope all goes well! 😕

Happy birthday once again!

ILY!

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Manjari1104
RESS 🤗 🤗 Thank youu soo much for this wonderful Gift!
Will read and comment very sooon! Was out all day today so couldn't read! Tomorrow I will read, 100%

Love youuu!

*Edited*

Heeey! 🤗 🤗
LOVED the updaaate :) Totally enjoyed reading this update.. It was nice and long <3
The whole scene was built up so well..! Bauji's Rage, Bhui's Disgust, Nupur's Guilt & Samrat's befuddlement. It was so beautifully presented..! I swear I loved each and every bit of it!
Mind blowing updatee..
I cant wait for the after math.. how Gunjan was percieve it and how would they actually START talking to each other after so much drama and the sudden wedding!
Loved the end! he carried her in his arms! <3 <3 MIND BLOWING!

Pleasee Update sooon!
Thank youu sooo much again, for updating for mee :)

Awww, it was a pleasure Manjari! 🤗 I mean, dosti ki hai, nibhaani toh padegi naa? 😉

Thank you so much for loving the update! LOL I hate short updates, so I try and write long chapters myself! 😳 I'm glad you could understand the scene and the characters so well..it means I kinda succeeded as a writer! Yayy! 😃

The aftermath is gonna be a bit dark..I just hope I do justice to it! The next two chapters will give you an insight into the minds of Sam and Gunjan!

LOL, I had to make it dramatic! What better than Gunjan fainting and Sam carrying her like a hero? 😛😆 Glad to know you liked it!

Updating in a bit! Please please update Fairytale! I miss it! 😭

Lots of Love,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Omfggg, They Blame Her For Her Mothers Death :(( 🥺 Thank Go Samrat Married Her; I Don't Think She Will Be Quiet Happy About That But Lets See 😳

I wouldn't say they blame her..but there's this resentment, at least from Bhui's side..Nupur is cool about it, while Bauji doesn't venture into that zone..Bhui wouldn't dream of saying all that normally, but she was MAD, and well, you know what happens when people lose their temper! They tend to say stuff they don't mean! Yes, its a good thing that Sam married her, but she's certainly NOT happy about it, that's something I can assure you! Read on to find out her reactions!

Oh, and thanks for that suggestion about the title..will surely work on it! 😃

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan
that was super filmy!!!!1111 total paisa wasool update!!!!!!!1

Haaye, sacchi? 😃 You made my day, like legit! Thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation! 😳

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: aashizin
woww dear what a amazing upd 👏 just speechless after reading it 👏whole drama was heart touching the way samrat helped gunjan mayur was silent witness who wanted to help gunjan angry bui and bauji and bitter words for gunjan i felt bad for gunjan loved to support gunjan and to save her from more humiliation he got married her , i read ur note i m sure this sajan's love story will be interesting to read how samrat will realize his love and how they will face situations ahead supporting each other and thanks for pm

Hey Aashi, thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation! 😳 Well, MaYur can't really help cause every time they try and talk and defend Gunjan, she just comes up with another lie about Sam and her, that they're too stumped to say anything! Yes, Sam married her to save her from humiliation, but its not like she doesn't feel erm..cheated? She's disgusted and shocked, and that's what you'll notice in the coming updates!

Sam and Gunjan will surely realise their love for each other, but that's a long way down the track. As of now, its gonna be a bit of nautanki till they get married officially and return to Mumbai!

Thank you so much once again for commenting!

Cheers,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: -CreativeSoul-
this was a very emotional update and i loved every bit of it ❤️ you seriously got my eyes glued to the screen as i read on every scene...i love the way samrat understood why gunjan lied to bhui about their relationship and how both of them stood up fro mayur :) and wow marriage sounds interesting can't wait to see what happens next
just one question on pg 16 u wrote this is a sad story does that mean it has a sad ending too please say no cause i hate sad endings.. anyway continue soon can't wait to read more :D

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tanzeel

Hi Tanzeel! 😃

Thank you so much for loving the chapter, really means a lot! Yeap, Sam has a past, but he's a gem of a person, and can do anything for his Chashmish!

And as for the note..nahi yaar, I'm a die hard filmy romantic, I can NOT give this fic a sad ending! There will be happy moments and dark moments, but I can assure you that Sam and his Chashmish will unite! 😃

Thank you for your comment and kind words!

Cheers,

Rit

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..Ektaa..

Amazing Update Rit ! =D
1st of all ur note, I do understand wat u said & Thank You for Clearing those things ! I knw SG r getting married witout their own consent & its completely Justified ! It wont be a "Happy Marriage" for them But I just hope that Once they realize their Love for Each-Other, I HOPE they r Happy wit this Marriage then =D I hope m not Wrong here & Ur planning for a Sad Climax 🤔 Lemme warn ya, I hate Sad Endings esp in SG's Case so u better not do anythng as such 🤔 🤣 Its a WARNING ! 🤣

Now the Update, Awww, I was feeling so Bad for Gun & Felt like KILLING Bui ! :X Ok, she's right at her place & I dont Blame her But Still, Arrrggghhh :XXX Atleast she shud show a lil trust on her Niece rather than trusting the Servants 🤔 & Loved the way u justified wit MayUr & their POV as well 😳 Gunjan is such an amazing Person ! 😍 She took all of the Blame just to save her Sister & Her Love ! That's Gunjan ! Like u said "Selfless" ! M So Proud of her & I can really relate to the Pride for her in her Friends heart's here ! Her Condition was SO Vulnerable But ! Felt so bad for her esp wen all the blames went on her & her mother was dragged into it ! BUT the Best Scene has to be the Climax scene ! The way Samrat bought Vermillion & filled her Maang, Totally Filmy & Bollywood-Ish ! 🤣 🤣 & I LOVE Drama's so My Fav Scene ! 😳 🤣 He is truly a Hero 😎 My Hero 😍 😆

Waiting Eagerly for the next Chapter ! 😃 M so excited for their Life after marriage ! 😳 Plz Do Update Soon ! =DDD

P.S- I Loved the Way u spammed my Inbox ! 🤣 & U can always do so wen it cums to Mohit Sehgal ! 😍 Gosh, M so so so so so Damn Happy ! =DDD I Literally went NUTS reading dat news ! Was Yelling, Shouting, Dancing, Jumping & WAT NOT ! Hugging Evryone around me, texting all my Frnds abt HIS Return ETC ETC ! Thank God Mom wasn't der @ Home ! 🤔 🤣 June cum already ! 😍 I cannot Imagine wat wud be OUR Condition wen the Promo wud be OUT ! I might Just Die & No Faint actually Coz I'll die only after watching Khamoshiyaan 😳 🤣 Eeekkksss, M so Happy to knw dat evn you are an ARDENT Mohit Deewani ! 🤗 🤗

K now, Do Update Soonish & Thnx for the PM ! 😳

Love,
Ekta 🤗

Ektaa! 🤗

I've begun to seriously wait for your comments, they're freaking amazing! 😃 So thank you so so much for your awesome comments!

Firstly, thank you for understanding the note! It is impossible for SaJan to have a happy marriage, especially considering the fact that the marriage is not a happy or voluntary one! Well, once they realise their love for each other, it will obviously be a bed of roses, with the occasional mia-biwi ke nok-jhok! But sadly, that's not what my fic's about, at least not till now! My fic will end at the point where they BOTH will fess up and accept each other! So don't worry, I can promise you a very happy ending! 😃

About the update..see, Bhui didn't really trust the servants. When R-C told her about their suspicions, she didn't bombard Gunjan straight away. She kept an eye on her all day; and it was just sheer bad luck that she always seemed to catch SaJan in compromising positions. So its not like she didn't trust her niece at all, its just that she was in the wrong place at the wrong time!

Gunjan is very vulnerable and fragile, but she's kept her fears to herself, as you may have noticed. She'd just begun to open up to Sam, but well..Bhui came in! See, Gunjan is a quiet person, who's always into her books because of the fact that she's living in the guilt of snatching her sister's/dad's happiness. And she knows that if she saves MaYur, somewhere in heart, Nupur will be happy for her relationship, and that is what Gunjan is trying to do. She just wants to see her sister happy.

Gunjan's mother was dragged into it in a fit of rage. Bhui is FURIOUS, and naturally, she didn't really think about what she was saying. Like I mentioned before, she wouldn't have said all this in a normal situation, but she was mad and not thinking straight, cause of which all this happened!

ROFL, the last part where he married her is my personal favorite! I just made it super filmy and bollywoodish, and to a certain extent it did work out! Like I mentioned, I am a sucker for filminess, which is why you'll see a lot of it in my fic! Glad to know you liked it! 😃

Next update is in a bit, and I hope you like it! 😳

Thank you so so much for the comment!

Lots of Love,

Rit

PS: OMG I was so excited for Sehgal's return, and today I see the TB article which showed some absolutely contradictory statements! I'm just so heartbroken and miffed, IDK what to say or do! This is so not happening! But whatever happens, will be for the best..so yeah! Hoping for the best for us, and for Mohit!