The Life and Lies of Mr and Mrs Shergill-Upd:23/07

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"Har ladki ka sapna hota hai, ki use apne pati mein hi ek accha dost mil jaaye. Lekin main bahut khush-kismat hoon, ki mujhe apne sabse acche dost mein hi apna pati mil gaya. Main. Naina Catherine Kapur Patel. Aur yeh thi; meri kahaani." Preity Zinta, Kal Ho Naa Ho

Samrat and Gunjan were nearly inseparable, and called themselves special friends. They knew each other better than they knew themselves. They cherished their friendship above every thing else on this planet.

But what will happen when these two special friends are forced to get married under unavoidable circumstances? Will they be able to save their friendship? Or more importantly, will the two of them be able to adjust and accept their new relationship?

Join Samrat Shergill and Gunjan Bhushan Shergill on this journey of friendship, love, angst, jealousy and misunderstandings, as they discover each other and rediscover themselves in the wonderful institution called Marriage.

Character Sketch:

  • Samrat Shergill: The "dude" of the college. He's a basket ball champion, a complete cassanova and has no interest in his studies whatsoever. He's filthy rich, and his parents fulfill all his desires. His father handles a business in Scotland, and he lives alone in this huge mansion which his father has given him. He has an extremely disturbing past, because of which he's extremely insecure, and averse to the idea of true love and marriage. No one is aware of his past, not even Gunjan.
  • Gunjan Bhushan (Shergill): A quiet girl, who was born and brought up in a little known town called Morena. Her mother had passed away during childbirth, and this is why somewhere she blames herself for her mother's death. She buried herself in her books and her studies to try and drown the guilt away, as a result of which she's always topped all her classes and exams.
  • Nupur Bhushan: Gunjan's elder sister. Extremely vivacious and filmy, and has to relate every thing in life to a romantic story or a YashRaj movie. She's very protective of her sister, as she feels her sister is too naive and innocent, and anyone can take advantage of her. She also has a very short temper and a very crass vocabulary, and her only dream in life is to find her Raj and experience a classic YashRaj love story! But to her immense astonishment, she found herself falling for the nerd of the university, who only had time for his books and studies.
  • Mayank Sharma: An average, middle class boy, who's only aim in life is to study really hard and get a good job and make a lot of money, so that he can let his mother retire and relax in peace. His father was a Major in the army, and he lost his life when Mayank was barely 7. Mayank was an all rounder, and was often called the star student of Excel because of his amazing academic records. Mayank had no time in his life for love or romance, till he came across Nupur Bhushan, who changed his life forever.
  • Dia and Uday Bhushan: Nupur and Gunjan's cousins. Dia is a year older to Uday, and both of them study in Excel along with Nupur and Gunjan. Dia is really pretty, and is an aspiring fashion designer. All the guys in the college are after her, but she's not looking for a serious relationship. Uday, on the other hand is really slow, and all he can think about is food, and how can he find his Princess Diana! Both are very close to Gunjan and Nupur.
  • Shashi Bhushan: Nupur and Gunjan's father. He loves them a lot and has tried to fulfill all their wishes after his wife died. He loved his deceased wife a lot. He's a strict disciplinarian, and has always been rather proud of his name, respect and status in the society.
  • Benji: Samrat's best friend and confidante. Closest to Samrat after Gunjan, and often helps Samrat out when he's in sticky situations by taking the blame on himself.
  • Sheena: A late entry in the story. Highly beautiful and self obsessed, she's every man's desire, but she only had eyes for one guy: Samrat. She absolutely loathes Gunjan, because of her immense importance in Samrat's life. Dates Samrat for a certain period of time in the story.

(Characters who's names are in green are the ones who I have fiddled with a bit, to make things a bit more convenient for me.)

A/N: This is my first attempt on a MJHT FF. There are some things that are canon, but there are a few obvious differences in the plot lines. Also, since this FF will be focusing on SaJan's life after marriage, both of them need to have a past that defines their characters. How Samrat and Gunjan help each other overcome their inner demons and let go of their past is a major part of the story, and it is in this process that they will discover their love for each other.

This fic will be mainly romantic, and it will have a bit of angst and drama in it as well, because of Samrat's (slightly) dark past. I'll try and incorporate comic moments in it as well, but a lot of my friends say that my jokes suck, so I don't think I'll be very good with incorporating too much comedy here! There will be a bit of MaYur in here, but the fic is mainly a SaJan one!

I'd like to warn you in advance that I'm a bit like Nupur, which means I'm VERY filmy. So don't be surprised if you see certain scenes that resemble actual movie/soap scenes that have taken place.

My story picks up from the holi sequence, with a few minor changes, which are as follows:

  • Mayank and Nupur fessed up during the holi sequence, and now both of them are in a relationship. (much to the relief of everyone around them!) Unfortunately, they haven't stopped fighting!
  • Dia is NICE to GuNur, and she doesn't really mind them so much. She's a good friend of theirs.
  • The holi sequence has happened right before their exams, so the story starts when the semester has just ended and GuNur are going to Morena to meet their dad, and for Chinky's wedding.

I've fiddled with Samrat and Gunjan's past a bit to add a bit of angst to the story. According to the show, GuNur's mother died some time AFTER Gunjan was born; but in this fic, I killed her like immediately after Gunjan was born. Bhui is the same old khadoos lady we know (okay I've made her WAY more khadoos here!), who loves her nieces a lot but is very strict.

I'd like to dedicate this entire fic to one of my besties here on IF. Jenny (Jen_ILoveAR), if it wasn't for you, I probably wouldn't have written this fic! You introduced me to MJHT, SaJan and MoNaya, and look where I am now! =P Not to mention the fact that she actually helped me out in creating a major twist for this fic, without which the fic wouldn't have been able to progress! So thank you so so much Jenny! *hugs* A special mention goes to Manjari (Manjari1104)! She's the one who encouraged me to publish this! Manjari, I've just gotten to know you a few days back, but I must say that you're a really nice person and an awesome friend! All the best for your boards, once again!

I'd love it if you guys would read and review, and also press the "like" button! 😳 If you wanna be PMd for every update, please "Like" this particular post, or drop me a PM, and you'll get the reminder! 😊

PS: The title has been inspired from a chapter from the book Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. The name of the chapter is "The Life and Lies of Albus Dumbledore".


DISCLAIMER: This is entirely a work of fiction. All characters belong to the PH and CVs of the show Miley Jab Hum Tum, and I take no credit for it. I'm just playing with the characters and creating a story. The plot line is entirely mine, and I request you not to copy any part of my story anywhere. Thanks.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index

Prologue: Page 1

Chapter 1- Morena: Page 7


Chapter 2- Secret Meetings: Page 11

Chapter 3- Midnight Rendezvous: Page 14

Important Note: Page 16

Chapter 4- The Marriage: Page 18

Chapter 5- The Aftermath: Page 23

Chapter 6- Altercations: Page 25

Chapter 7- The Divorce: Page 27
Edited by -ritchelle- - 13 years ago
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Prologue



(Gunjan's Room, Mumbai)

"Kya? Ek mahina? Chashmish ek mahina? Tum ek mahine ke liye Morena nahi jaa sakti!" whined Samrat, as he pouted over his mug of coffee.

Gunjan just stared at Samrat rather exasperatedly, as she continued to pack her stuff.

"Tumhe pata hai naa, ki meri cousin Chinky ki shaadi hai? Toh mujhe toh jaana hoga naa? Aur vaise bhi, semester to kal khatam ho gaya tha naa? Toh main toh college bhi bunk nahi kar rahi hoon!" replied Gunjan, as she pushed her glasses further up on her nose and began to pick out some books to take with her.

"Lekin Chashmish, main ek mahine ke liye yahaan pe kya karoonga? Please, mat jaao!"

"Uff oh Samrat, tum naa bilkul bacche ho! Ab main jaa rahi hoon, lekin Uday Bhaiiya, Benji, Mayank aur Dia hain naa? Baaki sab bhi toh hain!"

"Uday aur Dia bhi Morena jaa rahe hain." replied Samrat sulkily.

"Voh toh baad mein aayenge naa? Aur voh bhi sirf ek hafte ke liye! Baaki sab toh yaheen pe rahenge! Aur tum apne family ke saath holidays spend nahi karoge Samrat?" asked Gunjan with a smile, as she zipped her suitcase shut, and finally took a seat on the bed next to Samrat.

A dark look spread across Samrat's face, as his face suddenly became utterly devoid of all emotions.

"Chashmish, yeh main tumhe pehle aur aakhri baar keh raha hoon. Mujhe apni family ke baare mein baat nahi karni. Agli baar se unka naam bhi mere saamne mat lena!" said Samrat darkly, as he slammed the coffee mug on Gunjan's bedside table and walked over to her balcony.

Gunjan was shocked to see this side of Samrat. She re-winded one year of her life and realised that even though she was extremely close to Samrat, he'd never mentioned anything about his family, and now he was telling her never to mention it again! It was all very suspicious to Gunjan, but she decided to leave the topic for the moment, and concentrate on cheering her special friend.

Gunjan walked over to the balcony and stood next to Samrat, as they stared out at the gloomy sky. It was 3PM in the afternoon, but for some reason the sky was overcast, and it seemed as if there was going to be a huge thunderstorm later.

"Samrat.." began Gunjan, unsure of what to say.

"Bolo Chashmish?" said Samrat, without looking at her.

"I'm sorry!" replied Gunjan quietly, as she held her ears and stared at him through her glasses with her big, brown eyes.

Samrat turned to face Gunjan, and immediately melted when he saw Gunjan in that pose in front of him. Chuckling, he took her hands in his own saying, "Tumhe mujhe sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Chashmish. Lekin main ab bhi naaraz hoon, kyunki tum Morena jaa rahi ho!"

"Jaana toh padega naa Samrat? Chinky ki shaadi hai, aur Bauji bhi Dubai se ek saal baad aa rahe hain. Unke saath bhi toh time spend karna chahiye naa?" said Gunjan with a warm smile.

"Hmph! Theek hai. Lekin promise karo ki har roz mujhse phone pe baat karogi?" asked Samrat.

Gunjan laughed at his kiddish antics and nodded in assent.

"Aur tum aate hi mere liye gaajar ka halva banaaogi?" continued Samrat, in the same kiddish attitude.

"Samrat, maine already tumhare liye halve ka ek bada dabba banake rakha hai. Jaate samay use le lena! Aur phir bhi agar tumhara pet nahi bhara, toh aane ke baad main tumhare liye aur halva bana doongi!" said Gunjan with a laugh.

"Kya? Chashmish, you're like the best!" said Samrat, as gave her a quick hug and zoomed out of her balcony to go and attack the halva.

(Samrat's Room, Mumbai)

*Lightning Strikes*

*Loud thunder*

"Nahiii! Diii!" screamed Samrat, as he woke up with a start in the middle of the night to the sound of the thunderous rain hitting his roof. His eyes shone with unshed tears and he was drenched in sweat, as he bitter memories flashed in front of his eyes, drowning him in grief.

Spoilers for the First Chapter: Morena!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Ritchelle 🤗

I am so thoroughly amazed by the changes you have made to the original characters of MJHT. I can totally think about HOW guilty Gunjan must be. Your mother dying BECAUSE you were born is the worst nightmare of any child I suppose. & Samrat's dark past would be interesting to know about. Overall great Character Sketches and I am really looking forward to this FanFic. Oh great. Sheena is 'EveryMan's Desire'.. Hmm.. If I were a man, I would despise her! :P

Thank Youu for that special mention 🤗

*Edited*

Just Saw that you posted the prologue too <3 It was Fantastic. Loved the entire bit. It was too Short! :( But Otherwise you got me glued to my screen. Samrat's past is so bad? The last paragraph was astonishing. & Aww how sweet of Gunjan to make Halva for him <3 She is actually a great friend. Lovely Prologue :D

Hopefully we'll get another update sooon <3

Love,
Manjari :D
Edited by Manjari1104 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manjari1104

Hey Ritchelle 🤗


I am so thoroughly amazed by the changes you have made to the original characters of MJHT. I can totally think about HOW guilty Gunjan must be. Your mother dying BECAUSE you were born is the worst nightmare of any child I suppose. & Samrat's dark past would be interesting to know about. Overall great Character Sketches and I am really looking forward to this FanFic. Oh great. Sheena is 'EveryMan's Desire'.. Hmm.. If I were a man, I would despise her! :P

Thank Youu for that special mention 🤗

*Edited*

Just Saw that you posted the prologue too <3 It was Fantastic. Loved the entire bit. It was too Short! :( But Otherwise you got me glued to my screen. Samrat's past is so bad? The last paragraph was astonishing. & Aww how sweet of Gunjan to make Halva for him <3 She is actually a great friend. Lovely Prologue :D

Hopefully we'll get another update sooon <3

Love,
Manjari :D



Manjari! 🤗 Wow, that was a fast review of the fic! 😃 Firstly, thank you so much for all the encouragement and the help, and of course, the wonderful reviews about the fic! Glad to know I could keep you glued to your screen for that little bit of time! I hope I manage to do justice to this fic, cause this one is rather close to my heart!

I have kept everyone's characters intact (Except Dia, cause I needed her to be nice here!), but I have only fiddled with their past to add a bit of depth and to explain certain character traits. I've explained the reason as to why is Gunjan such a book-worm, and you'll soon be getting to see the reason as to why is Sam such a cassanova! Sheeena! 😆 LOL, her character is basically similar to what we saw, but she may be a bit more bitter and vicious here! I'm not tooo sure, her character will come MUCH later in the story!

About Sam's past..well I haven't exactly decided HOW bad is his past gonna be. Yes, it is dark and it haunts him a lot. I have two options: Either I make his past like REALLY dark, OR, I make it somewhat dark, but for some reason it has affected Sam a LOT. His past comes out a bit later, so I have time to think about it in peace!

As of now, there's gonna be quite a bit of fun and drama in Morena, and once they return to Mumbai, that's when the fic will really start!

I've written down the first two chapters, but till I've not written down the next chapter, I don't wanna update another one. So as of now, wait for a week or 10 days for the next update!

Once again, thank you so much for everything! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey great ff...I really liked the concept.
Thanks Manjari for PMing it to me.
Amazing start.
Please update soon and add me in your pm list.
Love
Ambika
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Hey Dear
first of all congo for new FF n dat to on my Favourite Sajan yaar...
wowww thnksss
i really loved the title..
" The Life and Lies of Mr and Mrs.Shergill"
really amazing title...
hmmm nw coming to CS
really loved Sammy's character...
same in MJHT bt his dark past... omggg
have to wait till u reveal it...
ohh Gunjan Bhushan Shergill haayy loved name 😆
n loved her character as usual my cute n sweet doll
hmm so puri gang hai gud...
well but wo samrat ka past kya haii re hmmm n hell wo
sheena bhi haii nahii plzzz koi to usse apne ff me maar daalo
wo vamp kahi bhi pahoch jaati haii
loved starrting
hell GUnjan morena jaa rahi haiii
bichara mera sammy akela reh gaya
use bhi morena bhej de yaar... bichara kaise rahega Gunjan ke bina...😉😆
n of god...
Samrat screamed in sleep helll
want more plzz try to updt soon yaar
muje mystry ka wait rahegaaa
first i treally loved it coz most of the ffs or ss on sajan are before marriege
nthing after marrige so its really very different story n concept...
well dont count me in mad person...
mein aisi hi hu
plz do cont n add me to ur pm list
thnks to ur frnd who pressure u to write
n thnks manji for pm dear...
dont forget to pm me ohkkk...
Love❤️
Radhi
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ritchelle-



Manjari! 🤗 Wow, that was a fast review of the fic! 😃 Firstly, thank you so much for all the encouragement and the help, and of course, the wonderful reviews about the fic! Glad to know I could keep you glued to your screen for that little bit of time! I hope I manage to do justice to this fic, cause this one is rather close to my heart!

I have kept everyone's characters intact (Except Dia, cause I needed her to be nice here!), but I have only fiddled with their past to add a bit of depth and to explain certain character traits. I've explained the reason as to why is Gunjan such a book-worm, and you'll soon be getting to see the reason as to why is Sam such a cassanova! Sheeena! 😆 LOL, her character is basically similar to what we saw, but she may be a bit more bitter and vicious here! I'm not tooo sure, her character will come MUCH later in the story!

About Sam's past..well I haven't exactly decided HOW bad is his past gonna be. Yes, it is dark and it haunts him a lot. I have two options: Either I make his past like REALLY dark, OR, I make it somewhat dark, but for some reason it has affected Sam a LOT. His past comes out a bit later, so I have time to think about it in peace!

As of now, there's gonna be quite a bit of fun and drama in Morena, and once they return to Mumbai, that's when the fic will really start!

I've written down the first two chapters, but till I've not written down the next chapter, I don't wanna update another one. So as of now, wait for a week or 10 days for the next update!

Once again, thank you so much for everything! 🤗

That is NOT fair. 10 days? 😲 Hmm.. Well, can't really complain but please try and update a lil faster.
And yes I totally understand your plot. The best part about this fic is that you've kept the characters intact. It reminds us of the good old days of MJHT and the changes you brought about are also interesting. & Yess.. I know I am sure we'll come to know :D
I can't wait for the FUN & DRAMA. Even though I am not crazy about romance (like youu 😆 ) But I still love a little fun and drama. Would love to read further. Humph. We will have to wait.
And I wouldnt mind either, because in both of them the common thing is that its affected Samrat in a very severe manner.. so thats what the main thing is. Just remember something, before creating a problem always think of how to solve it first... 😆 I have had a very bad experience with that!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just one word AMAZING.!!!!!!!!!
truly missing sajan a lot n then this ff thank you so muchhh for starting it n pm me it ...it was just wonderful...character sketch was awesome...the prolouge is too awesome..loved sajan s friendship ...it was reallly interesting ...loved it a lot...title is awesome too...!!
continue it soon..
Love,
thank you so much for the pm
Marie..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Dear! 🤗
Awesome story...Lovely prologue..
SaJan scene was really cute...Last scene was a little scary
Samrat's past looks really disturbing...
can't wait for the next part
cont soon..Add me to your PM list !


Nila ❤️

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