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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: yusam
very beautifully written babes.. lykd how the scenes were compared wid the past n the present... very well written.. was choked !! end mai milaaoing them right!! :)
thnx for the pm... update soon pls!!

Thank You so much! Glad you liked my style of writing and were moved by it cos that is ultimately what the writer wants - a connect with the reader. :)

And end...woh toh tabhi pata chalega... 😉 😆

Updated part to be out in some time.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: mjht4everr
nice update
loved it

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ayaniie-chan
Rae!! No need to mention it, I'm glad you like it!😳

Coming to the story, beautifully written!🤗 I loved how you have managed to put across both their state of mind so clearly, this is too creative yet at the same time pretty realistic because of the character's nature still being intact, makes it much more easy to visualise, needless to say, I really enjoyed reading it! Great job! 👏Gosh, I'm being spoilt here, reading your ff everyday!.. hope you'll update soon! 😉😆

Lol! Thank You, Annie! Hope more people get as 'spoilt' as you! 😉 😆

I am so glad you like my writing style and think that it is true to the characters...that is one of the things I strive for while writing using characters others have established so beautifully...

Thank You once again! :)

Updated part to be out in some time.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: ss374
I loved the second part!!
And I really like the way u have written it. Its very well written!!
Do continue!!!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

Updated part to be out in some time.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: lollipop4u
Awesome. please continue! :D

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

Updated part to be out in some time.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-
Really good! Loved it!

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it.

PS - I love your avatar! ArHi <3

Hope we get moments like that again soon! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: swetha10
wonderful update..
awww felt bad to c see Khushi in pain..
hmm Arnav's remorse...
plzz continue soon

Thank You! :)

And if you liked Arnav in remorse mood, dont forget to read the next chapter. 😉

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-
I guess people on the forum have vouched to make me go mad behind their writings...
As if the list wasnt long enough I open this post and here starts one of my new addictions...
This one was so amazing...I dont knowif I could actually comprehend with their pains...but ya there are bits and parts I could feel...And I guess thats what keeps the reader hooked on to such wonderful writings...
Poor Khushi...or poor Arnav I dont know...Both these characters confuse me these days...But still I guess the OS dawne some light on me...Both seem to be justifies in their positions in their actions ...And I am waiting to read more asap...
loved it

Lol! Thank You, Shobu! :) *Hugs*

You are right...as a writer, one of my main aims is to get my readers to connect with the characters and I am glad I got you to that in parts. :)

Glad you like my writing style and are confused about Arnav and Khushi because quite simply they are meant to be confusing in the sense that you want to support both but at the same time slap both. :p

Keep reading. :)