AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

wow awesome os😊😊..loved it❤️...the punjabi background was totally different👍🏼..amazing..loved the way you portray their emotions soo beautiful...thanks for the pm😃

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Hey Dear,

This was just awesome. it was really heart touching. I could connect with what Ridz was feeling without armaan. I had tears in my eyes wen Dadi scolded her or spoke in a rude tone but wen I read the reason she did it due to, I cudn't help feel a warm feeling. it seriously is a beautiful feeling to be loved & cared by your in laws.

Armaan Riddhima's reunion was perfect. really deir desires must have reached their heights due to dis long separation. Armaan's thoughts n his words really made me feel his condition, surely he has suffered a lot, being out dere all alone.

have a happy stay back home. n please don't stop writing once you return.

love,

Nimra.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

awsm os.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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819504

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Beautifully written...
Amzing os...
Jst lovd it

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

1st of all a great story dear!!

just loved it...i really like yr descriptive style...it makes the story come alive

great work dea

and ofcourse u r doing good look at the likes ...why u thinking u aint!!

do come back dear and write more..

u r a blooming writer

thanxx a tonne for the pm

eid mubarak and congo on yr bro's wedding

have a great holiday

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sweetgirl555

@sweetgirl555

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

I read all ur os at one go!!!
They all are awesome
Loved them
Write more...

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arima_mallik

@arima_mallik

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Hey i recently read ur OS.And all of them are wriiten so beautifully! Nice writing simply loved it!

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

OS 16 sweet one yar..:)
loved it..!

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#719

haye your last os took my heart away jii.what a faboulous workk jii.love it..
so sweet and romantic..:D
ana ji kamal kr deta..
congrats for your brother marriage..!