AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

hey... dear i just loved it..

i read ur OS many time.. i just loved it yaar...

don't stop ur writing style...

ur concept are just amazing...

do not stop plz...

and bee jaldi jaldi free from ur festival and family function and do write plz...

loved ur all OS...

do write...

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Amazing os!

Loved it completely...

The way you showed their emotions...

Superb!

Very sweet, cute, aweome... 😃

Loved rajji and avi...

Lolz... Gauri is such a kam chor! 😆

Mind lowing os!

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kritika_24

@kritika_24

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

hey,

this one was sooo different...the whole punjabi bachground...shilpa as the bahu...doin all the chores...hadn't ever imagined a character like this!

pehle mujhe laga either armaan is dead or is in army...tabhi toh she was alone...taking care of the family...and i so didn't want it to have a sad ending... but i was glad armaan was equally in love with her and was craving for her...and that thing that he said to her parents was so sweet!! <3

and i've checked all the pages...itne lambe lambe comments mile h is os k liye..please odn't stop writing yaar...not even for a while...kuch to thoda bohot likhte rehna...

anyways, ramzan mubarak!

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sjain

@sjain

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

YOU ARE NOT GOING ANY WHERE 😭

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kashish

@kashish_23

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

a very beautiful n different OS

AR as punjabi..it was sumthing really unique n u did a great job in describing there emotions

that separation n den the excitement to see each other..every emotion was beautifully described

n dat dining table scene was really cute 😊

the end could have been better 😳

bt still it was an awesome OS 👍🏼 👏

P.S- please dont stop writing..u r one of the best writers here.😭

ramadan mubarak 😊😊

Edited by kashish_23 - 12 years ago

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

beautiful update..
lovely potray of emotions..
from sad to passion..
all the scenes are too good

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RiddhimaBasket

@RiddhimaBasket

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Hello Ana. Great OS. I agree with all. Different and creative and a very beautiful OS. U know when I started reading it I was kind of pictured how that story would be. But as I proceeded reading it, it was a totally new concept. I love it when I picture a concept and while reading it I am proven completely wrong and a new story comes up. I specially like that riddhima did not meet Armaan among so many people and met him alone. Even dadi ji turned out to be so good in the end. In short I enjoyed every small part and every intricate detail of the story. I really appreciate your creativity. U definitely should keep writing it. I hope u to see some of ur work soon. Be back soon with a bang.
Take care
Keep giving us such beautiful stories to enjoy.
Bye

Edited by RiddhimaBasket - 12 years ago

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jiyaa_m

@jiyaa_m

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

one of the sweetest n realistic os ever

u bring ridz emotion so well n armaan;s feeling that i actually see them infrint of my eyes while reading loved it

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Nurshad.kajen

@Nurshad.kajen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Honestly speaking..i have no words to describe it..i loved this Os A lot..may be because it has a real life touch in it..so i could easily connect..the feeling u describe is too damn good..thumbs up for that..the AR/ARSH scene was perfect..please come with more such OS and keep writing because you are awesome in all these OS..I hope this cmnt is nt a one liner