AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148 - Page 68

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

16 os complete ho gaye hai...os 17 uska cont tha...
my last os with follow tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

16 os complete ho gaye hai...os 17 uska cont tha...
my last os with follow tonight or tomorrow

Originally posted by: sameera_12

It was really a sweet one yaar... the way he was hesitant and all but at last he confessed it and was not hesitant any more...
Riddhima being naughty, i just loved her and her bold steps... She gave him that right on her and that just turned the whole scenario... He confessed he loves her and they were together!!

Simply i loved the whole thing and as usual great job!!!
Luv,
Sameera😊

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Awesome Os..

you described everything in a beautiful way..

Love their relationship..

Thanks for the PM..

Originally posted by: sjain

Main aagayi :D with my comment :) Ab gussa mat hone Please :(

First of all why didn't u continue with the previous one you were suppose to write 2nd part of it :/ I want its 2nd part soonish :(

:O OS with out song it seems so incomplete including songs in your OS increases its charm & I so missed that :( But it was such a simple adorable cute one-shot <3 I fell in love with it instantly ^_^ Liked how Armaan was so hesitant Loved that little bold step by Ridhima It was definitely something different from what you have written in past ..It was one "drama-less" "twist-less" one shot LOL but very innocent & heart-touching Armaan's character - I simply fell in love with it <3 ..Keep up the good work <33

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

Hey Dear...loved the OS
it was such an adorable one-shot
loved it how Armaan nd Riddhima were so hesitant...in end how she showed him his rights on her..
no twists or drama very innocent & heart-touching scenes...beautiful OS👏👏




Lots of love
Jannat

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Well!! Yeh toh right hai that ur works are rarely 'Innocent' 😆...

This was was 'Innocent' , Simple N Cute 😃...

Wow!!! Kitna acha arrange kiya Armaan Malik ne sub kuch , First time hai...

Aahaan!! 'Merciful' rain Armaan keliye toh hai , Shilpa aur bhi sexy jo lag rahi thi 😉...

Wah!! Ghar mein entry mar ke seedha Bedroom mein entry...

Haye!! Abhi se woh yeh sab share karne ke khwab dekh rahi hai...

Ek bar kamre ka rasta bata diya next time poochne ki zaroorat he nai pari , kya baat hai 😉...

Hmm..Tie gift ki , impressive...

Tie khareedne ke baad usse 'Tie' karna bhi seek liya ,'abhi se planning ho rahi hai 🤣...

Armaan kitna slow hai , lagta hai Shilpa ko he sab kuch seekhana pare ga 😆...

And the story ended with the confession N a little peck on forehead ..

Sweeet story ...

Poore time dono ne bohat kam baat ki but do do ilfazon mein converse kar rahe thay 😆...

Loved it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊.