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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
awww nice part. Great job 👏 good luck on ur exams 👍🏼do try to write even if they are small part 😳 . sorry 😳 .. oh yay kripa is coming in, man i hope the dad is a normal human soon enough 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
yeh looking forward to kripa's entry
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
dear u have written a very sweet & cute part.. sujal to meet kashish has climbed the tree.. 😳 ab yeh mukti kyun jayegi sujal ,kashish ke saath un dono ko akele rehne do.. 😃
dear write ur exams well we all can wait for ur story..ALL THE BEST....... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
lookin forward to the next part and all the best 4 ur exams
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
part 16-
well. i know u all are excited for krips entry. but u have wait a little bit more. sorry. the story might get a little boring but keep on reading thr fac fic.
ok recap: mukti sees prena witha picture of the unknown baby.
m= moma what r u going
preba turns around and sees mukti
p= oh nothing. what u um doing here
m= i came to give u a good night kiss
p= ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
mukti gives prenan a kiss.
m= mom who is this??????????????/
p= oh. She......... is my friend child
m= she is very cute. she just looks like u. for a minute i thought she was my lost sister
p= oh no( hestiated). Now u go to seeep
mukti leaves the roon
p= i have a much more careful from now on
next scene:
kashish is putting on makeup and wearing a very pretty blue suit and mukti enetrs the room
m= wow did u look hot today
k= thanks
m= didi , but u look fat in blue
kashish come and slaps her
k= shut
m= just kidding
k= are u ready
m= yes
k= give me five minutes
m= did u lok like u are going to a wedding
k= no
m= did hurry up
next scene: we see sujal in his office
sujal is looking in the mirror and getting ready an d prem walks into his cabin

s prem what r u doing here
p= i heard u were going on a date
s= and
p= i thought i should go with since u don't have much experience with girls
s= kashish sis is going to be there as well so u could come to
p= wow, i hope she is hot
s= prem
p= hurry
s= i am getting ready
p= u look good. now lets go before we get late
next scene
mukti and kashish are in the rrestuarant waitng for sujal
m= didi where is he
k= he will come. have paitwnts
m= i am hungry
k= shut up
m= did i am going to the bathroom
just then sujal enters the resturant . he stopped and looks at kashish for a minute. prem is with him
p= what happened let go
s= nothing
sujal come to the table
s= hi kashish u looks beautifual today
kashish is blusing at htis point
k= have a seat
s= oh kashish this my bro prem
k= hi
p= hi bhabhi
k= bhabhi
p= u will become my bhabhi vey soon
kashihs is blushing again
s= where is mukti
p= who is mukti
k= mukti is my sis and she is in the bathroom
p= bhaiya= i forgot to telll u about this annoying girl in mu school. her name is mukti to
k= what college
p= greenfield
k= that where mukti goes
p= really
just then mukti comes
m= hello everyone
prema turns around and sees her
p what r u doing here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
m= what ru u doing here?????????????????????????????/
as u all know i have final this week so i won't be able to reply so that why i am writing long parts to make up for it
enjoy 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 ITS OK IF U CANT REPLY AND ALL THE BEST 4 UR FINALS

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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
part 17-
hello agin. i was free so i thought to write another part. ok same scene mukti and prem come face to face
p= sujal is my big brother, u see. what r u doing here
m= kashish is my big sister
k= u know each other?
m= yes, i made him lose in the muck tiral
p= wrong, u cheated
m= that what losers always say
p= u......................
s= now stop it u too
m= lets go didi i don' think sujal is the right now for u
k= mukti shut up and sit down
p= bahiya i am going
s== no u are not
s= mukti what do u want to order
m= a knife to kill your brother
p= u..........
k= mukti that is not nice
m= let go
k= sujal she will have a cold coffee with icecream
s= ok. what will u have
he gives kashish the romantic look
k= i think the same as mukti
s= prem and u
p= get me some zeher so i could kill myself
m= i think u are right. loser usually commit sucide
k= mukti why do u hate him
m= remeber that day when i came to the hospital to give u lunch that day beacuse of his car i got mud all over my clothes and he did not bother to say sorry
p= prem never says sorry
m= mukti never forgets
s= waiter, 4 cold coffee with icecream
just then sujal cell rings
it is veena on the phone
s= hello mom
v= sujal hurry up
s= why
v= your dad wants to meet u
s= why
v= some project don;t ask question just come with prem
s= byt moma i am with kashish
v=plz beta for me
s= ok moma for u
sujal with an upset expression looks at kashish
s= kashish we have to go. dad called osme meeting
m= yes
p= coool
s= sorry
k= it is ok
sujal and prem leaves

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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
nice part n best of luk wid ur examz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
👏 👏 👏 good job n good luck on exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
Awesome job on the last couple of parts! I wonder if his dad will announce Sujal's marriage with someone else

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