Humko Tumse Pyra Hai - Page 9

hey the two parts where very nice... 👏 do ur exams well.. ALL THE BEST.. 😃

Thank you for all your lovely comments and I wil try to update my fan fic whenever i have time.
Kashish 😛

Part 18
Prem and Sujal leave the resturant and reach kandelwal manisoin. When sujal and prem walk in venna comes running to them.
v=sujal and prem where were you two your dad is waiting for you.
Then she looked at sujal and pre and starte to look for something.
p=mom what are you looking for? 😕
v= whre is angad your dadwants to spaek to the 3 of u.
s= mom I don't know where angad is.
v= i hought he was with you two.
Then prem turns around and see angad coming in.
p= mom don't worry angad is here.
v=angad where were you your dad wants to speak to you theree. Anyways go upstaris quick or your dad will get mad.
When sujal, angad and prem reach Dilips room they see an angry Dilip.
s=dad u called us.
d=(yelling)where were you theree ihave been waiting for for such along time 😡
s= sorry dad we got stuck in traffic(lieing)
d= anyways i ahve some thing important to tel you three. Today we are having aparty at our house because some foregin delicates(wrong speling)and i am throwing a party in which i wil invite all the bussiness tacons in India. I you theree to organize this party. i do not want anything to wrong ok.
p= dady cool i won't be able to oraganizthe party because I have to study for my upcoming exams.
s=papa i ahve to work on the London project so I won't be able to organize the party either.
a= papa i am free i will organize the part sincei just finished the Pune project.
d=ok then angad you will organize the whole party and don't foret that this party has to be perfect. Get that
a= yes papa
d= you three leave now.
sujal,angad and prem leave dilip's rom and all go back to work.It is night and the party has starte and all the guest ahve arrived. Dilip is talking to one of his the foregin deligates mr. smith
s= nice partu mr. kandelwal
d= Thanks my soon angad organized it.
s= the party is good but don't you think that your house looks so old fashioned.
By this comments dilip is speechless and cahnges the subject.while Dilip is busy with is guest sujal is satnding by the bar and theinking about kashish.Wile he was thinking about kashish Prem comes and sees sujal is day dreaming. prem brings him back to life.
p= waht happened sujal bro thinking about kahish or should i say kashish babhi.
s= yes 😳
p= any ways stop day dreaming bro we have to attend the guest or dady cool will not be so cool.
Sujal attends the guest and soon the party is over.
Enjoy 😊

nice part.....bechara sujall...all he doez dese dayz is day dream...lol... 😆

a very good part.. 👏 this dilip is so irritating......... 😡 sujal bechara is dreaming about kashish he is sweet...... 😃 plz continue soon...... 😊 😛 😃

part 19-
ok so this scene takes place right after the party.
dilip is really angry because of what the foreign delegates said. he is pacing aroung the room. Prem angad and sujal are standing there and veen is there as well
d= i can't beleive that my mouse, my house is so old-fashioned
a= papa it is ok
d= nothing is ok. my whole reputation was ruined
s= papa we will renovated don't worry
d= this is all your mom fault
p= no it is not
d= don't talk back to me. then he turns to veena. veena what do u do everyday
v= i.............
d= u do nothing. u just sit around and do noting. u are worthless
s= papa plz
d= see u sons have no manners and slaps aroung the face
a= papa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
d= veena u have one month to change this ld- fashioned hous into something new. if u don't then are realtionship is over
v= plz dilip don't do this to me
d= u have a month
dilip leaves the room
p= mom are u ok
a= don't worry leave up to me
veena is crying. her nose is bledding as well.
v= now everything is in your hand
a= don't worry mom
promo: kripa entrance next part
enjoy

Originally posted by: shahidlover24

Awesome job! hmm...Seems like Kripa will be helping Angad with the house 😉

i think so to

very good job.. 👏 but i want to kick dilip....... 🤢 me waiting for kripa's entry & i think that she will be the person who will renovate sujal's house hey but i also think prerna jis bachchi ka photo dekh khe rothi hain it is kripa... 😉 😉 😉
plz continue soon....... 😃