Humko Tumse Pyra Hai - Page 15

i just read ur fanfic and i think its great!!! 😳 i love the pm scenes (you should put in more of those) 😃 😃

hey where are you ??? please continue the story soon... 😭

I ahve a message form Kahish 805 she will be posting the update in a fe min.

Part 26
Recap: kana in jsut intriduced and sujal was caught day dreaming by his dad.the part satrts when Perm goes colloge and tommrow is his graduatoin along ith Mukti. Soon he reaches the lecture hall and aftre everyone has attended there lecture and cming out perm spots Mukti

p= hey basnti were r u going
m= hell u want o come 😡
m= hey y r u so rude
m= becuz i am like that
Mukti is about to laeve when prem catches her hand.
m= leave me prem
p= mukti i though..
mukti interrupts
m= i didn't know yyou think anywayz let me go;
p= LISTEN TO ME BASTANI I AM TRYING TO SAY THAT LETS BE FRIEND SINCE TOMMROW IS PUR GRADUCATOIN! BUT NO I CHANGE MY IND I DO NOT WANT TO BE FREINDS WITH A STUBBRON GIRL LIKE YOU! 😡
perm leaves in anger and mukti si satnd there felling gulity
Then we Kripa she reaches home from the mandir
k= ma maa where are you?
k=Ma?
Soon kripa gets worried and searches arounfd teh house and finds her poojia on the floor. soo kirpa manges to takke her to the hospital. In the hospital:
k= nurse plaese my mom has fainted she needsa doctor
n= wait
k= pale hury up
n= calls the kashsih
n= doctor there si a emergencey case
ka= ok i will be there right now
kashish takes poojia in and does her check up and comes out
ka= Ms. Kripa
k= yse
ka= your mother is fine she jsut has a hightbloodpressure
k=thanks
ythey both shake hands and while they are shaking there hands they have a werid feeling. a feeling like they know each other. Soon kripa takes poojia home.
At the saharma house mukti is sitting in her bedroom thinking about waht perm said
m=(to herself) i gusess i was harsh on prem
m=i gusess i shoiuld be hsi friend i wil say sorry to him tommrowevn though he is a bandar( 😃 )
Perm in his bedroom
p= taht basnati she so rude gosh but I guess i soule habe scaremaed at her
p= anywayz why am i thinking about her / Do I like her?
p=no wayz i think i am going crazy. soon he closes the light and goes to sleep.

i know todayz part was boring becuz i wrote it ina nhurry i will try to write anotehr part today.
Kashish 😊

part 27
It si muktia nd perms gardutoin.aftre the garuatoin cermomany
m= i am sorry perm
p= for what?
m yseterday i thik i was alttle rude
p= it's ok and i am sorry 4 yeling atyou.
m= it's ok
Akawrd slience
p= we finally graduated
m= yah
p= know i gusessi don't ahve to fght with youa nay more
m= i guess except when sujal jiju gets married to kashsih di i guess we have to fight over the shoes
perm laughs
p= tahts 4 sure u love to fight
m= hey! u do 2
both laugh
p= ok i have to go see u around
m= u 2
A tey are walking away
M= why do i feel so werod around him amywayz oh my god I have to go to the hospital to meet kashish di and i am late.
p= I am satrting to like basnti her childness, her fighting with me, preety eyes and her cute smile. waita min. am i going crazy or what. I think i need to chil out a litle bit.
Then we see krp enetring Kandelwal house
v= kripa beta tum/
k= masaste aunt ia m here to meet anagad sir
v= he is in his room why don't u go there and veena shows herthe roo
Kripa gose up and sees angad day dreaming she keps on knocking on the door and comes inside.
k= angad sir
Soona gad gst bach to life
a= oh miss. krip u r here
k= yse sir i wanted to show you soem designs . anagd looks at kripa's designs and is amzed
a= amzaing designs so when are we satrting on the construtoin
k= antime
a= ok
anagad an kirpa r about tolaeve when kripa slip on one of angadsbedsheeta nd she is about o fall but angad cathches her.
a= wwo she is dos preety so innocent
when kripa opens her eyes she sees angad strong hands protecting her. son veena comes in and see them in tsis state and hsi quite happy.
v= ummm umm
soon angad and krip get back tolife and see veena nd move away
v= yah kya hore tha
kripa satrted to blush
a= kuch nahi mom.
a= kripa was about to fall so..
v= oh i understand 😉
k= soon kripa runs out of the room bluhsing
a= anagad is about o leave wnhen venna stops him
Waht does veena want to say?

kiran me too happy you have continued... 😃 & as usual the parts were very nice..i enjoyed reading them.. keep up the good work..... 👏
continue soon please.... 😊 😛 😃

@last u continued...gr8 part 👏 👏 👏 ...n keep continuing... 😊

wow thanks for updating!hp u update sn!!

Thank u all 4 ur lovely commnets i wll try to update soon.
Kashish805

hey your story is great 👏 i loved your fanfic 😉 😉 😉 anyways i'm totally AK fan 😳 😳 so i wanted 2 ask u that if kanan is positive or negative 😕 🤢 cause u said she loves money dearly 😆 😆 😆 plz do continue soon becuz i'm hoping 2 c your good work in this FF 😳

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