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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey folks I am very sorry I can not cont. this fan fic for about 1 week because I am going out of town. As soon as i return and will write 3 long parts.
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry i cudn't comment since such a long time....all dese parts ver awesome.....suajl n kash were barely in dair...but still it was pretty gud.....keep it up...hope ur examz went gr8....well do cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey kash... its more than a week now plz cont soon...
😕 😡 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran where are you yaar....please continue soon... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
I am very sorry guys I didn't cont. my fan gic for a long time ecause i went to my uncles house for one week and he had no internet and i just came back yesterday. To make it up to you guys I am going to write more than one part today.
Part 24
The scence starts with angad showing kripa around the house and when angad and kripa were talking someone calls Kripa from behind and thhen we see a girl standing by the door.
g= hey krips
k= finaly u came but why r u so late
g= well i was with some friends
k= anyways forget about it and let me introduce you to my boss
k= sorry sir this is my asitant and my sis kanan
ka= hello
a= nice to meet u kanan
a= kripa u can tell kanan the details
k= sure sir
Angad leaves and so do kanan and kripa.Then Kanan and Kripa take a taxi home and while sitting in the taxi.
ka= krips your boss Mr. Angad he is so cute
k= kanan don't you think we should concentrate on the project not how cute our boss is( sort of jealous)
ka=ok ok krips take a chill pill.
k= ok lets forget about that.
k=OMG!
ka= what happened krips
k= I forgot that i told mom that i will go to the mandir today and give something to pandti ji there.
ka= then go
k= ok but u come with me
ka= no ways krips you kow I don't like this
k= ok then you go home
ka= ok bye krips
k=bye
Kripa goes in the mandir and while she is there she sees Venna.
k= namaste aunty
v- kripa u
kripa touches her feet and venna gives her asheirvad
k= hoe r u aunty
v=fine but why are u here
k= my mom wanted to give something to pandit ji
v= oh ok
k= ok aunty I have to go bye
v=bye
v(thinking)= she is such a nice girl and she has very good sanskar I wish she ould be my baho. Angad and her jidi would look really nice i gusess i have to talk to angad about this

ok guys I know thsi aprt was boring but I will try to make the next part intersting
Kashish805 😃 😛



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Posted: 19 years ago
Kanan:

Kannan is Poojia's real daughter. Kanan is the total opposite from Kripa she is not very sanskari but she is samrt and also wants to be a interoir designer like Kripa. She loves her mom and Kripa really much but she can do anytging for her happiness and the one thing she loves dearlly is money.
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran me so happy that ur back & u continued your story........ 😃 the part was nice...keep up the good work... 👏 tho now veena is thinking about angad & kripa but i think kanan will be a rukawat between angad kripa's love story..........this is my guess what say ????😛
plz continue soon..me will be eagerly waiting... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
gud gng..... 😊
plz cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz continue soon.. 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......... 😭

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