OS: a place called Hope... Update Pg 13.

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Your story brought tears to my eyes!

Fabulous work!

Well done and keep them coming...

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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

This was heartbreaking to read

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princessnida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

This made me bawlll my eyes out! It was beautiful!!

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Ohh my gosh!! This is literally the best writing I have ever read...and believe me when I say that because I read novels all the time...this OS was just simply Amazing..Outstanding...Incredible...not one word can define how amazing this is
Like in the beginning when she had said that her sides hut and Arnav getting stiff at the word..right then my first tear...
I was a lil confused at what you were portraying with the story of the flowers and I overlooked it..butwhen she mentioned the game to Arnav...I swear. I went back and read the scene again..and tears started to shed...!! Gosh..!! That was just soo extremely emotional...the way you had conveyed how knowing that your dying makes you wish to enjoy every last bit of it..
I simply loved it
Still have droplets of tears in my eyes.

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

the first work from you that I came across, and can't say how impressed and fanatic I've become!! A wonderful story, reminded me of 'A walk to remember' my favorite book! I love it! Do you have an index of all your creations??? I would love to read them!

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Omg this has me all depressed it's so sad and yet so beautiful. So touching!

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caged23

@caged23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

When I first started reading I was like "What is going on?". And then I read the second part and got all choked up.

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: SweetFarwii
Ohh my gosh!! This is literally the best writing I have ever read...and believe me when I say that because I read novels all the time...this OS was just simply Amazing..Outstanding...Incredible...not one word can define how amazing this is
Like in the beginning when she had said that her sides hut and Arnav getting stiff at the word..right then my first tear...
I was a lil confused at what you were portraying with the story of the flowers and I overlooked it..butwhen she mentioned the game to Arnav...I swear. I went back and read the scene again..and tears started to shed...!! Gosh..!! That was just soo extremely emotional...the way you had conveyed how knowing that your dying makes you wish to enjoy every last bit of it..
I simply loved it
Still have droplets of tears in my eyes.

thats really sweet of you...This story is really close to me.
im gonna keep ur comment bookmarked.😳