OS: a place called Hope... Update Pg 13.

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nameera

@Nmyra

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Posted: 13 years ago

Yayy bubziiee finally got it up...the banner is beyond gorgeous, i love that shot of Arnie, the look...soo...sigh...that boy has the weight of the worlds on his shoulders.

Now,

⭐️⭐️I CRAZY loved two things in this ficlet. ⭐️⭐️

The First was the Midas line...gosh i was sooo drawn in by that point i was like...omgomgomgomg...

and the second this was the entire flower concept...lol i HATE flowers...all kinds of em...except one...lol 😳

The 'sleep'...well i suck at angst i can't help but say nooo make them happy...so i will believe that Khushi woke up flower in hand to see the sunrise on another day, and with some luck, my praying Arnie scored some mega points with DM and, DM decided to not dissuade her newest followers soon soon after he started believing ...again.

You are the Visser Three of Talent babe...Animorphs reference just in case anyone reads this and goes huh?!

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was so touching, and long ! Great OS ! :D

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Josupra

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Posted: 13 years ago

it is so emotional.. Was a bit confused with the first part when I read it.. re-read again after knowing their discussion before 40 days & then bang.. you made me cry

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Anjalie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome!! it was sad yet touching.. please continue soon!!

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nmyra
Yayy bubziiee finally got it up...the banner is beyond gorgeous, i love that shot of Arnie, the look...soo...sigh...that boy has the weight of the worlds on his shoulders.

Now,

⭐️⭐️I CRAZY loved two things in this ficlet. ⭐️⭐️

The First was the Midas line...gosh i was sooo drawn in by that point i was like...omgomgomgomg...

and the second this was the entire flower concept...lol i HATE flowers...all kinds of em...except one...lol 😳

The 'sleep'...well i suck at angst i can't help but say nooo make them happy...so i will believe that Khushi woke up flower in hand to see the sunrise on another day, and with some luck, my praying Arnie scored some mega points with DM and, DM decided to not dissuade her newest followers soon soon after he started believing ...again.

You are the Visser Three of Talent babe...Animorphs reference just in case anyone reads this and goes huh?!

you make my hard n lazy work so worthy...😳
🤣🤣 yes...we love ANGST through out n BOOM!!!! happy ending...n DM will hear Arnav dont worry...
n OMG!!!! Animorphs just gets me so high...wat they say about Visser.."Sadistic and cruel, with a penchant for torture,"...
buhahahaha fish!!!!!! u sure we didnt lose eachother on any planet while he n Visser One n Elfangor had some sadist triangle thing going on?...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww i loved it
it was so emotional and cute.
Im going to be the pessi and hope she lives on!
You pinned everything down perfectly
it was sad yet touching.
I dont know what to say except that i don't want khushi to go!
Continuation!

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Posted: 13 years ago

So first of all

what a beautiful banner !! That shot of arnav looking at a sleeping Khushi.. just added a real picture to the picture you already painted for me ! It makes this piece of writing so much stronger !!

I just wanted to repost parts of my message to you earlier

Aww baby it was so so beautiful ! It made my heart so sad to read, they had such little time, it was so emotional! I loved it so so much, especially the bit about getting her favourite flowers, and how they spoke to eachother throughout this was so heartbreakingly wonderful... with that little tease of uncertainty looming about their every moment, how Arnav wants her to stay, how Khushi tries to act contempt with everything..

so so wonderful...

Leukemia is such a dreadful disease, I think you captured the way it can ruin the best of life in a short time so perfectly... thanks for this amazing One shot !

Love, Hayley

(and thanks for thanking me 😳)

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haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Aww i loved it
it was so emotional and cute.
Im going to be the pessi and hope she lives on!
You pinned everything down perfectly
it was sad yet touching.
I dont know what to say except that i don't want khushi to go!
Continuation!

you loved it!!!!!! thankyou...😳
yay well all will be pessi now...come on give me company...i thought u loved me!!!!!!!!😭

n no!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no continuation🤣

Edited by 18shabbo - 13 years ago