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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Redrose21

Hey People 😊
How r u all?
Thank you sooo much all of you for the likes & comments 🤗 It means a lot to me.

Really Sorry for not updating the next part yet. I didn't finish writing the part. Will try to complete the part and update as soon as possible, hopefully by the weekend.

Lots of Love
Madura

ok will wait...so weekend starts from 12:00am on saturday right?😛😆😉
sorry dnt want to pressure u or anything bt i can't help it u knw!🤓
this ff is making me despo for an update!
love this ff a lot...thts y!😃😳
update asap😊 will be waiting impatiently😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Jinal No need to say sorry dear 😊
I am happy u love this FF so much 😃
Will try to update tomorrow evening
If not, then surely on sunday
Take care dear 🤗


@Asma How r u? 😊
How is ur studies?
I will update tomorrow or on sunday

U Pls update Virtue & Vice soon
Waiting eagerly
Take care dear
Love u 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Redrose21

Hey People 😊
How r u all?
Thank you sooo much all of you for the likes & comments 🤗 It means a lot to me.

Really Sorry for not updating the next part yet. I didn't finish writing the part. Will try to complete the part and update as soon as possible, hopefully by the weekend.

Lots of Love
Madura


weekend's here gal!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Readers, I know you want to read present of AR. Please be patient and read this part. The next part might be the most awaited part 😉
Sorry for the late in updating. I couldn't update in the weekend as i said because of some personal reasons.
Enjoy reading 😊
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PART-11
Riddhima already had planned to surprise her bhaiya by visiting him on Sunday and she was not going to cancel it because of what happened in the gupta house last night. She rang the doorbell and heard a male voice saying "coming" after a few seconds. Someone of atul's age opened the door. "Yes" he said and looked at her who was standing there nervously. "I want to meet to Mr.Atul Gupta" she said nervously. "May I know who you are?" "I am Riddhima. His sister" "Oh, so you are riddhima. He always keeps talking about you. Come in Riddhima" he said smiling. She smiled. "Where is bhaiya?" "He is sleeping" "I will wake up him. Which one is his room?" she asked him. "That one" he said pointing towards a white door. "Thank you" she said and walked towards the room.


Riddhima slowly opened the door and looked inside. She saw her bhaiya sleeping on his stomach sprawled on the bed. Her eyes grew moist and she slowly went near the bed. She sat beside him and caressed his forehead. He smiled lightly. "Bhaiya" she called him softly. He didn't respond and she called him again patting his left arm. "Wake up bhaiya" he opened his eyes and stared at her shocked when he saw her sitting in front of him smiling. He sat up immediately and whispered "Riddhi" rubbing his eyes. "Surprise" she said smiling wide. "Riddhi, you are really here? I missed you so much princess" he said with moist eyes and hugged her. "I missed you too bhaiya" she said hugging him back. "Are you fine riddhi? You look stressed" he asked her parting from the hug looking at her. Riddhima gulped. "No riddhima, don't let bhaiya know anything. His career will be spoiled" she said to herself. Smiling she said, "I am perfectly fine bhaiya. How are you?" Atul knew his sister was hiding something and it's related to his parents. He thought to ask her about it later and said "I am fine princess. You came alone here?" "Haan bhaiya. I came alone" atul looked at her surprised.



Riddhima smiled at him and said "Now go and take a shower, I will cook lunch. It's almost 11 O' clock. I will be here only till evening. I don't want to waste a single second" she said and they both stood up from the bed. "Only till evening?" he asked disappointedly. "Haan bhaiya. I didn't get leave from college. Sorry" she said sadly. "It's ok princess. I am happy you came here all the way to meet me" he said hugging her. She never went anywhere without him. Now she has travelled from one city to another alone, only for him. He knows how difficult it should have been for his little sister to come all the way from Mumbai to Banglore alone. "Excuse me, may I come in" they heard a voice and turned towards to the door. "Come in Abhi. Riddhi, He is Abhimanyu. My colleague and now a good friend" atul introduced abhi to her. "Nice to meet you riddhima" he said smiling at her. "Same here" she said smiling. Abhi's phone rang, he excused and went from there. "Riddhi, you use this washroom. I will take a shower in the other bathroom in abhi's room" atul said and she nodded.


After freshening up, she went towards the kitchen. She found only the essential things for coffee and Maggi packets there. She prepared coffee and keeping the cups in a tray, went out to see her bhaiya coming out of the room. She gave a cup to him and they sat in the couch, drinking their coffees and talking when abhi came out of his room. He sat on the other single couch there and riddhima gave a cup to him. "Thanks riddhima" "You are welcome". Abhi and atul discussed about some official matters. Riddhima glared at atul and he gulped looking at her angry face. "Bhaiya, today is Sunday. Plus I am here. You are talking your official things today too? I am not talking to you. Bye. I am going" she said in fake anger and stood up from the couch. "I am sorry princess. I am really sorry. Don't go' please please" atul pleaded thinking she really was angry. She giggled looking at him and laughed out when he frowned. "Bhaiya, I was just joking. I am not going" she said controlling her laughter and atul hugged her smiling. This is all he wished for, her laughter and happiness. He wanted his sister to be smiling and happy always. He will do anything just to see her one smile. Abhi smiled looking at them.


It was 12.00PM. Riddhima wrote a list of the ingredients she wants to prepare lunch and gave it to atul. "I will be back in twenty minutes princess" he said and stood up from the couch. "Give it to me atul. I will go. You stay here with her" abhi said and took the sheet
from atul. "Thanks man" atul said to him and he smiled at him.


"What happened princess? You want to tell me something?" atul asked as soon as abhi left. "Bhaiya'woh'" "Kya hua riddhi?" "Bhaiya, I d..don't want to stay in that house till you come back" she said as Padma shouting at her last night flashed in her mind and she shivered just thinking of it. Atul noticed her shivering and he knew she shivers like this in fear only when they had done something. "What happened riddhi? Did they do something?" "No bhaiya. They didn't do anything" she lied. "It's..hmm'it's just i...i am scared to stay there without you" she said looking down. "They definitely had done something. This is why I said I don't want to do this training leaving her alone there. They had scared my sister and made her take a decision to move out from there. I will not leave them for this" atul thought angrily. He calmed himself and spoke, "I understand what you are saying riddhi. But where will you stay?" "In college hostel" "Will you be comfortable there?" "Yes". "Please tell me what happened there riddhi?" "Nothing bhaiya" she lied again and thought, "I am sorry bhaiya. You will leave everything and come back if I tell you what happened. Your career is important. I won't let you ruin your career, that too because of me. Please forgive me bhaiya". "When is she going to stand up for herself in front of them? How will I bring her out of this cage she had locked herself in? She is too naive. She is not going to tell me what happened. She is stubborn" atul thought worried for her. "Riddhi, I will come with you when you leave in the evening and will come back here after you shift to the hostel" "Your work?" "I will take a day off. Don't worry about that. No problems about it" "Thank you bhaiya" she said smiling and hugged him "Don't thank me riddhi. You are my sister" he said hugging her back.


Riddhima was little uncomfortable in abhi's presence. But she managed somehow. Armaan's number was unreachable from morning and she was worried. She cooked lunch. They three had lunch talking and laughing. Later in the evening, atul and riddhima went back to Mumbai. Padma and Shashank saw them entering the house and was surprised seeing riddhima with atul. They thought riddhima is in her room. "Atul" Padma called him when he walked past them without acknowledging their presence. "I am surprised and shocked you still remember my name. I thought you forgot me" he said sarcastically and climbed the stairs with riddhima. He didn't even want to look at them. Padma and Shashank sat there silently not reacting at all. After all, atul knows a secret about them and they couldn't afford to make him angry. They have no other choice but to listen to him.

*******


Riddhima paced to and fro in her room worried. She talked to Armaan last when she informed him she reached atul's place safely in the morning. After that, his number was unreachable. He had gone to Panchgani with Bi to drop her. Its 12 in night now and his number is still unreachable. She prayed god to keep him safe. She tried his number again and again. Frustrated, she threw her phone on bed and sat with moist eyes. "Hope he is fine. Can't he call me? Why he is so careless? Doesn't he know I will be worried for him and waiting for his call? Please bhagwan, keep him safe. Please" she mumbled angrily and worriedly. Her phone rang flashing an unknown landline number. She hoped it to be armaan and answered the call.


Riddhima breathed a sigh of relief when she heard his soothing voice. "How are you basket? You reached Mumbai? Are you fine? What did your bhaiya say? He agreed? When are you shifting to hostel? Answer me basket. Why are you not talking anything?" he asked her. "Hello basket, you there? Hello" he asked when he didn't get any response from her. "I am not going to talk to you" she said angrily. "Kya? Why? What did I do?" She didn't say anything and kept quiet. "Basket answer me yaar. Please basket, please talk to me, please" he pleaded. "I am calling you from morning after i talked to you reaching Banglore. Your number is unreachable. Why you didn't call me all day? Where were you'haan? Don't you know I will be waiting for your call here? Can't you just call me once and say you are fine? You don't care about me and you don't think about me. You just'" "Stop it Riddhima" he interrupted her angrily, "It's raining here in Panchgani from morning. Networks are affected by rain and that's why my number is unreachable. I am trying to call you from morning too. Landlines were also not working and I couldn't call you. Luckily I got line now and called you. You are scolding me without asking me what happened. I.." before he could say more the line went dead. Tears rolled out of her eyes and she hugged her pooh bear crying.



On the other side armaan mentally smacked himself for shouting on her. But what can he do? He was already frustrated not talking to her from morning, he was missing her badly. He didn't know what her brother said about her staying in hostel. He wanted to go Banglore with her. But he had to drop bi in panchgani and couldn't go with her. On top, he couldn't talk to her from morning and when he finally called her, she was scolding him for no fault of his. When she said he doesn't care about her, all the anger and frustration from morning came out and he shouted on her. "How can she say i don't care about her? I love her and she is saying I don't care?" he shouted angrily throwing his phone in the bed. He inhaled and exhaled relaxing himself. After a minute when he was in his senses, "What have I done? She cares for me as much as I do for her. She scolded me because she is worried for me. She too will be in the same state as me not talking to me from morning. I am an idiot. I shouted on her. She will be crying now. I made her cry" he thought and scolded himself. He tried calling her again but the phone lines were dead again. The night passed sleepless for them.

*******

Riddhima didn't get a room in the hostel as all the rooms were filled. Atul said her not to worry and attend her classes and he will take care. Nodding her head she went to the college. Atul immediately went back to gupta house and took a key from his personal locker in the room, which no one knows about. Not even riddhima. He called john and went somewhere with him. "Where are we going atul?" john asked atul. "Home" he answered in a blank voice, not wanting john to know what he was thinking. They reached there and atul stopped the car in the front gate and opened it. He parked the car and they both went in opening the door. Atul looked around as his eyes grew moist. John kept a hand on his shoulder. Atul smiled at him with moist eyes. The house was clean and tidy as john goes there twice a month and cleans the house. Atul and john hung a photo on a wall, which they took from riddhima's room in gupta house. It was taken when he was 5 years old, with one year old riddhima and Mr&Mrs. Joshi, riddhima's parents.


Atul picked up riddhima from college after her classes were finished. Riddhima was surprised and shocked when she saw the house. It was the same house which she saw in her childhood albums, her parent's home, her home. She ran inside as soon atul stopped the car. Her eyes fell on the photo hung in the wall. She caressed it with tears rolling down her cheeks. Atul came and stood beside her. She hugged him sobbing. "This is the house where maa and paa started their life riddhi. This is where you born, this is your real home riddhi. Time has come for you to stay in your home. I will come here and stay with you after I come back finishing my training. But i am worried. How will you stay alone riddhi? You are so scared of being alone. Then how will you?" he asked her parting from the hug. "I will have to bhaiya. I can't be like this all my life. It's time I face my fears and learn to live independently. All my life you were with me in every step I took and I know you will always be there. I want to come out of this shell I have locked myself in and face the world. I can stay alone bhaiya. I will be safe here. Maa and Paa will be with me" she said determined. "I was worried how I am going to bring you out of this cage. I am happy you yourself are trying to come out of it. I am proud of you" he said and kissed her forehead. "If you want anything, call me immediately riddhi, I will be here" john said and she nodded at him smiling.

*******


Riddhima's phone rang. She answered the call lost in her thoughts without seeing who was calling her. "Are you fine basket? Where are you? Why you didn't come to the music class today? She heard armaan speaking on the other side. "I am fine armaan. I was shifting in the evening" she said in a blank voice. "Where is your brother? Is he there with you now?" "No, he is not here. He took a day off from work and came here with me. He went back to Banglore after I shifted here" she answered in one line to his questions. "I have to go now. Will see you tomorrow. Bye. Good night" she paused for a few seconds and said "I am sorry Armaan" in a low voice and cut the call without waiting for his reply. Armaan sighed. "Why is she saying sorry? I should be the one saying sorry. I shouted on her for no reason. She is distancing me from her. God, what should I do now?" he thought running fingers through his hairs. He thought to call her again and dialled her number. But cut the call before it could ring. "She must be tired. I don't want to irritate her. I will have to wait till morning" he said to himself.

*******

Armaan waited for riddhima in the music class. She hadn't come to BB court in the morning and was not answering his calls. She texted him saying she is in class and can't talk to him now when he called again and again. Armaan saw her entering the gates of Sangeet and ran to her. She smiled at him which didn't reach her eyes. "Basket we need to talk. Come with me" he said holding her wrist. "We will talk after our classes finishes. Not now" "No I want to talk now" he said pulling her somewhere. He led her to an empty room. He left her wrist and stood few feet away from her. "Basket, I am sorry. I am really sorry. I shouldn't have shouted on you that night" he apologised sincerely. "You don't need apologise armaan. It should be me. I scolded you for no fault of yours. It's just i'I wa..i was worried for you. And I shouted on you for no reason. It was not your fault that the networks were affected by the rain. I shouted on you without understanding and I acted so immature. I am sorry" she said in a low voice looking at him. She turned the other side when he bored his eyes into hers and continued, "Plus, I don't have the right to scold you. After all, i am j..ju..just a f..fri..friend and i don't have the right to question you" she said with closed eyes biting her lower lip controlling her tears. Armaan winced hearing her. She opened her eyes when she felt him near her to see him standing in front of her holding his ears. "I am sorry basket, I am really very sorry. I was so frustrated not talking to you that day after morning. And when you said I don't care for you, it really angered me and I shouted on you. I care for you basket. I care for you as much as you do for me. Please don't say you have no right on me. You have every right on me, only you have every right on me. You are more than a friend to me. You are important to me as much as my family. Don't distance me away from you. Please basket" he said sincerely, looking into her eyes and holding her hands between them.


"I am not ignoring you or distancing you armaan. I can never do that. I didn't answer your calls today because I was in class and last night I was not in the mood to talk to anyone. I just wanted to be alone. You are too precious for me armaan. I will never ever distance you or ignore you. I never want to lose you. You will always be with me na?" she asked him with moist eyes. "Yes basket, I will always be with you" he said kissing her hand and engulfing her in his embrace. "I am sorry for making you cry" he said and she looked up at him. "What? I know you cried when I shouted on you that night" he said and she again hugged him smiling. They stayed hugging each other, shivering with the closeness, their eyes closed and content to be in each other's arms. Time stopped for them as they stayed hugging cherishing the moment. They broke the hug and she lowered her eyes blushing, her cheeks pink. Armaan looked at her grinning. They both have almost confessed their hearts to each other without saying those three precious words.



"Basket" he called and she looked at him. "You understood what I said?" "What?" "I said you are more than a friend to me. You understood what I said?" he asked her smiling and his dimples deepened seeing her lowering her eyes and her pink cheeks deepening its color. "hmm'le..let'let's go to class. We a..are getting l'la..late" she stammered. She did understood what he said. She didn't know what to and how to answer to his question. Armaan held her wrist and pulled him to her making her bang in his chest. She closed her eyes as her one hand landed on his chest and other on his shoulder. He held her petite waist and smiled looking at her closed eyes and crimson cheeks. "I know you understood what i said" he whispered in her ear tucking her hair behind it. She shivered. Riddhima shuddered when Armaan lifted her chin making her open her eyes and look into his oceanic ones. He bored his eyes into hers, their eyes saying those three precious words. He pressed his lips in her temple lingering his lips there. They savoured each other's love and touch closing their eyes. He freed her from his hold after few minutes. She opened her eyes breathing heavily and looked into his and found immense love there for her. He smiled at her with his dimples making her heart skip beats. She lowered her eyes and ran from there smiling and blushing as she heard him say "Oye Hoyye"

*******


After two days,


Riddhima blushed smilingly staring at armaan who was talking to their classmate. They were practising for the instruments competition. She suddenly started singing looking at him.
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Aisi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua
Aisi chale jab hawa
(Love is in the air)
Ishq hua hi hua

Armaan smiled listening to her and started singing with her. Others played the instruments smiling. They all loved listening to Armaan and Riddhima singing. That too when they sang together, it was a musical treat to all of them.

Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Aisi chale jab hawa
(Love is in the air)
Ishq hua hi hua
Aisi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua
Ishq Hua aaa haaye
Riddhima sang smiling and blushing.
Ishq Hua haayaaaeeein

Armaan grinned. He felt she was singing what was in her heart. His heart did somersaults. Their eyes locked and they sang looking into each other's eyes.

Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
Guzare na wahan se yeh teri galti hai
Ho ho
Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
hooo
Rehte hain ab hum wahan
(Love is in the air)
Ishq hua hi hua
hoo
Aisi chale jab hawa
(Love is in the air)
Ishq hua hi hua

Others present there sang bringing them out of their trance. Riddhima's cheeks turned more redder and she lowered her eyes.

Hulcul hui
zara shor hua
Dil chor hua
teri ore hua

Riddhima sang closing her eyes smiling as his image flashed

La la la la la la la la la laaa
Ishq hua

"Will you dance with me basket?" armaan whispered to her. She opened her eyes and looked at him. "I don't know to dance armaan" she whispered. "Just hold me and look into my eyes" he said and she held his hand. He slowly pulled her towards him. Her hands landed on his shoulder and he held her by her waist. Riddhima shivered with his touch. Armaan smiled at her and they just moved in each other's arms looking in each other's eyes and singing, forgetting the world. Others present there also started dancing.

Kadmo ko sambhale
Nazro ka kya karein
Nazro ko sambhale
to Dil ka kya karein
Kadmo ko sambhale
Nazaro ka kya karein
Dil ko sambhale zubaan
(Love is in the air)
Ishq hua hi hua
Aisi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri ore hua
Ishq hua
Ishq hua


Riddhima lowered her eyes blushing as they ended the song. She came out of his arms and looked everywhere but not him. Armaan smiled showing his deep dimples. She went out of there leaving a grinning and happy armaan behind.

*******


Riddhima opened her home's door and stepped in blushing. She walked towards her parent's photo and mumbled "I am in love Maa. I love Armaan. He is the one for me Paa. You would have loved him if you were with me. I miss you both" and stared at the photo with moist eyes, caressing it. She kissed her parents picture thinking she is really kissing them. Her phone rang flashing "Armaan calling" and she stared thinking whether to attend the call or not. She is too shy to talk to him after their song moment in music class an hour before. The phone went silent but it rang again in few seconds. She pressed the green button and kept it on her ear. "Basket, you went home without telling me" he said pouting. "Give me your address. I will come there" "No armaan, not now" "Why?" "Armaan its nearing 9 O' clock" "Oh'sorry. But I will come to your home tomorrow. You said you didn't your arrange your things properly yet as you didn't get time. We will arrange your things tomorrow. Don't do any work now. Eat your dinner and go to sleep" he said lovingly. "Who will do my college work if i just eat and sleep?" "Yeah, I forgot about it. Eat your dinner, finish your work and sleep. Don't stay awake for longer" "Yes boss" "Oye, I am not your boss" "Who are you then?" "You don't know who I am to you basket?" she blushed hearing him. He knew she was blushing and he wished he was there seeing her. He so loved it when she blushes. Not getting any response, he asked her "Do you want me to tell basket?" "Armaan, I...i..iam h..hun'hungry. I will talk to you later, Bye" she said stammering and blushing and cut the call before he could say anything.

*******


Next day,

Riddhima ran to the terrace reaching home from college in the afternoon. The sky was covered with dark grey clouds ready to pour heavily any second. The cool breeze caressed her skin making her shiver as she stepped in the terrace. She felt so happy, there was this feeling of serenity from the moment she stepped in this home. Maybe because it was her parent's home. She felt like something was going to happen today. Something very good. She doesn't know what it was. But she felt an unknown happiness, she felt like singing forgetting everything. It was her way of expressing her feelings, be it happiness or sadness, whatever it is, she expresses it in her music. She started to sing enjoying herself and the pleasant weather.

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Ghunji Si Hai Sari Fiza Jaise Bajti Ho Shehnaiyaan
Leherati Hai Mehki Hawa Gungunati Hain Tanhaiyaan
Sab Gaate Hain Sab Hi Madhosh Hain
Hum Tum Kyun Khamosh Hain
Saaz - E- Dil Chedo Na
Chup Ho Kyun Gaao Na
Aao Na.. Aao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na...

She sang thinking of Armaan, her Armaan, her heart's desire. She sensed his presence there and looked around the terrace, she didn't see him anywhere. "He is not here. How can he be here? It's just my imagination. I am always thinking of him, maybe that's why I am feeling his presence. You made me crazy armaan. I love you. I love you so much" she said to herself and hid her face in her palms blushing. She continued singing and twirling around the terrace, with a sweet smile adorning her lips which came from heart and reached her green eyes.

Tan Man Mein Kyun Aise Behti Huyi
Thandi Si Ik Aag Hai
Ohhh Sanson Mein Hai Kaisi Yeh Ragini
Dhadkan Mein Kya Raag Hai
Yeh Hua Kya Humein Hum Ko Samjhaoo Na...(2)
Sab Gaate Hain ...Sab hi madhosh hain'Hum Tum Kyun Khamosh Hain
Dil Mein Jo Baatein Hai
Hoton Pe Lao Na
Aao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na...

She was startled when someone pulled her from behind a small door there near the terrace entrance. She closed her eyes with the sudden pull and banged on his chest. Her hands landed on his shoulder. "It's him. I know his touch. But how can he be here now?" she thought and opened her eyes. She looked at him surprised when she saw him smiling at her showing his deep dimples. She was lost in his blue eyes. She saw immense love in his eyes and a sense of happiness and contentment. He walked out of behind the door, with her in his arms and stood in the terrace as the clouds began to drizzle. He sang looking into her green eyes.

Ab Koi Doorri Na Uljan Koi
Bas Ek Ikrar Hai
Ab Na Kahin Hum Na Tum Ho Kahin
Bas Pyaar Hi Pyaar Hai

He pulled her closer singing

Sun Sako Dhadkane Itne Paas Aao Na' Sun Sako Dhadkane Itne Paas Aao Na...
Sab Gaatein Hain... Sab hi Madhosh Hain Hum Tum Kyun Khamosh Hain
Ab Mere Sapno Pe Tum Hi Tum Chao Na
Aao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na...Aao Na'

She sang with him lost in his eyes

Ghunji Si Hai Sari Fiza Jaise Bajti Ho Shehnaiyaan
Hey Leherati Hai Mehki Hawa Gungunati Hain Tanhaiyaan
Sab Gaate Hain Sab Hi Madhosh Hain
Hum Tum Kyun Khamosh Hain
Saaz - E- Dil Chedo Na
Chup Ho Kyun Gaao Na
Aao Na.. Aao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na...


They stood lost in each other's eyes and breathing heavily. They stared into each other's eyes as the world around them stopped. It was them, only they existed under the sun at the moment. Armaan softly tucked her slightly wet locks behind her ear making her tremble with his touch. "At first I didn't understand when I fell for you riddhima. Now when I saw you twirling and singing, I realized I fell for you the very first time I saw you basket. And after that, in our every encounter, I have fallen for you more. When I see you, when I talk to you, when you are near me, when you sing, when you smile, when you cry, when you are irritated, when you are angry, when you are worried for me, when you care for me, when you play basketball, when you laugh, when you are not near me, when you blush, when you speak your heart out to me, I am falling for you every moment basket. I am crazily and madly in love with you. I Love you Riddhima. I Love You with all my heart Basket" he confessed his love to her. She stared at him with a flow of emotions in her heart. She was speechless. She didn't know what to say. She just stared into his blue eyes. She found ocean of love there, for her, only for her. "I Love You too Armaan" she hugged him and mumbled in her musical voice after almost twenty minutes. Armaan's heart swelled with happiness. He parted her from him a little and lifted her chin. She shivered and closed her eyes. "Open your eyes basket. Look into my eyes and say what you said now" he whispered and kissed her eyes making her shudder. "I Love You Armaan" she opened her eyes slowly and whispered looking into his eyes after a few seconds. She buried her face in his chest hugging him blushing crimson.



Armaan and Riddhima were the happiest people in the world at the moment. Their happiness knew no boundaries. They were over the moon. They felt blissful and content. They stayed in each other's arms for seemed like eternity. She came out of his arms slowly with her eyes lowered not looking at him. She turned and walked few feet away from him. Her back faced him. Her heart beating rapidly like it will come out any second. She kept a hand on her heart's place trying to calm down herself. She felt like it all was a dream. Armaan stood there looking at her shaking frame smiling. He walked to her and slowly turned her making her look at him. "This is not a dream Basket. Its true" he said in her ear and hugged her. She sobbed on his chest. "SShhh'no more crying basket. I won't let you cry again" he whispered and sucked the tears which rolled on her red cheeks. He kissed her eyes not letting more tears fall off her eyes. He kissed her cheeks lingering his lips there. She shivered with his kisses and held his shoulder more tightly. He hugged her burying his face in her hair and she hugged him back trembling and smiling.

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Thats a long part. Hope u guys liked it. Please read, like & leave your comments. Thank u sooo much everyone for the comments & likes on previous part. Will reply to the comments and send PMs tomorrow.

Love
Madura


Edited by Redrose21 - 13 years ago
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RESERVED..

Edited...


I was quite speechless after reading this musical confession Madura.
I hope now you would have guessed the reason for giving my reviews soo late.
I wished to write in peace about what I felt about this part...
Finally I've got the time...

Coming to the update,it was purely magical from beginning till end..
Riddhima's surprise to Atul was wonderful..
He was so happy seeing his baby sister.
I liked Abhi's small interaction with the siblings in between as well..
I loved the way Ridz woke Atul up completely astonishing him and the re-union of bro and sis was awesome..
The scenes that followed were also very nice.Ridz cooking lunch for her bro and his roommate was very good..

I still can't believe that she travelled from Mumbai to Bangalore to visit her brother.I guess love does strange things to people.Armaan is somewhere the reason behind this confidence in her.
I hate her parents.They are really mean to her.
I love the overprotective brother of Ridz a lot.He is so caring towards her...
I'm sooo glad that Ridz finally moved out of that hell.
Atul is a great brother to support her sister in everything just like way she encouraged him to go to Bangalore.
It was quite evntful to read Atul accompanying Ridz back to Mumbai and showing his cold shoulders to parents that was followed by both the siblings leaving the house after Ridz fetched her belongings..
Also,I liked the way Ridz missed Armaan terribly.Both of them had a very harsh converstaion and the reason was plain and simple that they were really concerned for each other and so much in love with each other...Armaan shouted at her.That was least expected from his side but he immediately regretted it.That was so much like Armaan's nature..

It was a complete unexpected surprise to see Atul taking Ridz to her paternal house.No house/hostel could have been better than this...I loved Atul so much for this thoughtfullness.
Armaan was sooo much

Ridz gave Armaan a good piece of mind by not reieveing his calls.It was a treat to read how disappointed Armaan was after not finding her in the music classes and BB court.
Thank God she finally came to the academy and answered his numerous worried questions.
Armaan's affection towards Riddhima is really amazing.I've always loved the way he is sooo concerned for her and tries to analyze her her every expression,gesture and moves..
I was in awe by the way they made upto each other..I was enchanted with Armaan's spells when he apologized to Ridz.Riddhima is so understanding,,I have always loved her for this serene nature...She has forgiven him even before meeting him.Wow!
The extraordinary confession without usning the three special words was simply out of this world.I loved this romantic and naughty side of Armaan as well when he asked Ridz that she understood what he meant...
The musical confession that conveyed their feelings to each other was marvellous.I already love the two songs and when you used them in this ff ,these songs became even more appealing to me than before.
Ridz confesssed her love to her parents.That was so emotional yet wonderful...
Armaan and Ridz's terrace scene and Armaan's surprise to her by visiting at her long lost home was beautiful.
Finally Armaan put his feelings into words and every word that he said was simply breathtaking...
AR's close sweet moments were the best part of this confession.
The shy Riddhima and an equally romantic Armaan made this moment outstanding.Ridz confessed her feelings to Armaan as well and that too in words.That was so enthralling..
I could visualize each and every scene of this part in my mind.
The heart to heart confession was the best part of this whole ff.
This part is going to be my favourite one.
This may be your first ff Madura but you are already a star jana in my eyes.
You are one of the best writers on IF and this musical ff is one of my favourite ones.
Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful piece of your work...
Take care!
Love you!
A warm hug from my side for this lovely confession part...
Muah!!
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Asma

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part cannot wait for next part.🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!
so sweet!
so hmmm...riddhima went to er real home...wow in a way i feel sad for ridzi yar...she hs to go through a lot n she is to naive to face it...bt i m glad she has armaan with her...=)
THEY CONFESSED!!!!!!!omg!yuupppiiieee!
finally!i knw they were going to realise this soon..bt u got me surprised!n i love this surprise!
Armaan n Riddhima r made for each other..i love how they care for each other and how they understand each other..it's so sweet!
if they love each other so much then y IN THE PRESENT were they behaving like tht?
y did armaan say he hates her?
i m thinking maybe riddhima's life was in danger?no,,,,tht jst can not be..sorry i m jst thinking like this coz i m used to action movies n all...
haha..anyways back to the part it ws awesome!loved the way u wrote it n included the songs...i could actully imagine them singing it..
n u knw u included my favouritwe songs!so thnk u very much for tht!
update ws lovely..n thnk u for the length of the part...i really enjoyed reading it!:D
love ya <3
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Awesome.
I loved this long and emotional part.
I feel bad for ridz.
I liked the way Armaan took care of Ridz.
AR kissed.Wow!
Plz update the next part soon.



Thanks Asma :)
i am glad u loved the part
Armaan is ridz's angel
Yep..they kissed 😳

Edited by Redrose21 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jinal3patel

aawww...such a beautiful update!

Comment on the past:-
so padma and shashank r not her parents????y do they hate riddhima? she doesn't deserve to be hated!she hasn't done anything..she is too naive!!!it's jst so sad they hate her...bt on the bright side she has armaan and atul!
so sweet the bond they share...i loved how armaan understood tht she would be uncomfortable staying at his house coz his paren'ts r not there...tht ws very thoughtful..i loved tht!
Comment on the PRESENT:-
*sigh* their kiss!!!!omg!
ok so y did HE do tht to riddhima?
i mean wht happened???he said i hate to riddhima bcoz he loved her????wht?
ok it must be something reasonable coz its armaan we r talking abt...
bt i desperatly want to knw wht happened!!!!y did he leave her..
bt the important thing is tht they still both love each other!
Overall comment:-
it ws a great part overll..i loved the songs u included...they match their situation..
plz update soon n do pm me if u r not busy...
thnk u very much for writing this ff!I really love it!:D



Thanks Jinal :)
Yes, S&P are not her parents & they hate her...reason?u will have to wait to know it
& yes, she doesn't deserve to be hated
Armaan and Atul are her angels...the reason she is living
U will read more of their lovely bond in the upcoming parts
Armaan is very thoughtful and cares for her sooo much..maybe thats y he left her
Yep..they kissed 😳
U will come to know why he left her soon
They never stopped loving each other 😊
Glad u loved the songs
I am never busy to send PMs to my readers...i might get late sometimes...but i surely send them
I am really happy u love the FF
Dont thank me dear...i should thank u for all the love & encouraging comments
Your long & detailed comments always makes me smile
It makes me soo happy
Thank u soo much for that
Take care 🤗

Edited by Redrose21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is amezing. A very emotional part
Edited by sakshilksg - 13 years ago

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