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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Awsum Awsum!!!!
its jus fantabulous...great job👏👏!

"r: ek ladka tha...uske dost ,maa,papa,dance, parties, luxory ,paisa ...iske alawa usse kuch nai pata...actually yahi uski duniya thi...par ek din achanak se ek ladki uski zindagi mai aayi thi...unki pehli mulakaat jhagde se hua... aur wo bina use pata bataye...uski nishani uss ladke ke paas chodke chali gayi...uss ladke ne bohut mushil se uss ladki ko bhul ke jab aage bad raha tha tab wahi ladki phir se uski zindagi mai aayi...phir se jhagda...par iss baar uss ladki ne bohut beimandari se uss ladke ko usski duniya se bahar kheech ke hamesha keliya apni duniya mai khaid kar liya...jaan na chahte ho wo ladka aur ladki koun hai???? wo ladki hai...wahi jo aaj dulhan banke waha khadi hai...( guys she stood as he spoke) ...and wo ladka mai hun...another spot light roamed around the hall and fell on him...kriya strtd walking to him slowly as he spoke...kriya maine aaj tak ye baat tumse nai kaha...aur nahi tum mujhse...kyun ki hume kehne ki jaroorat nai padi...hum ek doosre ki dil ko padhpaye...par mai aaj ye baath kehna chahta hun...

she stood in front of him and he went on his knees and head bent down he slowly looked at her as she placed her hand in his...he kissed her hand and looked up at her...

I LOVE U KRIYA...

actually ye baat akele mei kehte hai...par mai aaj poori duniya ko ye batana chahta hun ki tum mereliya kya hai aur kya maine rakhti ho...saying this he stood up..."

AWW!!!THIS WAS SOO CUTE N ROMANTIC.I LOVED THE ENGAGEMENT PART.UPDATE KARTE RAHO.N PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE😊

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#702

wowww deetha amazing
luv it yar ❤️
n song wowww...to good yaar
n song describe da naughty rey...is i m rite na
n dat lights of scene awww...dat shows dat hw much rey care abt his baatcutter
n dat I LUV UU...awww kitna achi trh bola...awww tum hi meri duniya ho n den kriya tum meri zindagi ho...hayeee!!!!!!!! kitne sweet h dono...i jst luv dem sooo much ki describe ni kr skti...n yipeee!!!!!!! finally engagment ho gyi

n yayyy partyyy tym u complete 100...congo shongo dear

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

it was so sweet..

loved the romance in public...

common update the next partasap

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

It was a lovely update deeta.

amazing written.

loved the dance seq nd loved the way rey proposed to kriya.

it was superb.

Amazing.

abhi next update bhi jaldi karo.

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#705

woww awsomme mann wat a lovely engagement man so cute and romantic jus lyk our kriyaansh hope we get 2 see dat 1 day in d3

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Awesome...awesome...awesome engagement part...luvd it...i cud actually imagine it hppening...d song ws rilly gud n fit in2 d situation...😊

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#707

awesome update deetha...loved it very much

the scenes where lights were gone before gangs dance was awesome rey is soo cute he cares for kria soo much rey understands before she says any thing and the dance it was awesome loved the song and description and the way rey proposes kria in front of every one was awesome

loved it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#708

its was awesome
and congrates for complieting 100
well done

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Arsha111

@Arsha111

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#709

fab... fab... fab...fabulous updt 😃thnxx 4 d pm

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#710

Yippee... This is getting better and better! Cool! I really am loving it to the max! U are really one wonderful and awesome writer! Looking forward the next update already! ;)

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