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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

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arey likhne toh do...i will surely update today kk???
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arey likhne toh do...i will surely update today kk???



Ok Waiting For The Update...😃
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plz...update fast na...aur kitna tym lagegi...just desperate to read kriyaansh...

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tat ws HAWTT!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
SHAADI...????????? 😲 😳


WWWOOOWWW...

waise 2 b vry honest mjhe shaadi nd all track baaki FF's mei kabhi pasand ni aaya... bt ismie pta ni kyu bht pasand aaya... 😉 😃

man...

d entire FF was sooo cuuuttteee... 👏 👏 👏

startin frm Rey's expressions regardin shaadi... 🤣 🤣 nd kria comin 2 house singin... 😆 dey both lost in each oda's thoughts... 😳 kria tryin 2 dress her up lyk a bride... 😳 rey mesmerised by her... aaawww... 😳 😳

all that was sooo cccuuuttteee... 😳 😳 👏 👏

LOVED IT... & ENJOYED IT 2 THE FULLEST... 👏 👏

awesom update... 👏 👏 👏

really... maza aa gya yarrr... 😃 too gud... 👏 👏 👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
guys !!hi!!! jaldi update de rahi hun na???actually maine socha 80 kal tak khatam nai hoga so i can update tommorrow...but...im shocked...chalo i agree my defeat...mai haar gayi...and luv u a lot maneet(lovely7010) and cherry(luv_arsha) and this part is soecially dedicated 4r u...



chalo jyada bak bak nai ...i will go direct to update...


PART-12

sh: kriya!!!!!!!! aur kitna tym lagega?????

k: are jst 1min baba...she ran washed her face straigtened herself...put on her gloss and ran to open the door...as soon as she opened the door sharon entered and strtd checking the room ...

K: sweetu kya hua??

sh: kuch nai rey room mei nahi hai...mujhe laga ki wo yaha aaya...

K: toh tumhe mujhpe vishwas nahi hai...

sh: turned to kriya...are shona aisa nai hai...i trust u par rey ko nai...and i know wo tumhe chup bhi karvasakta hai...

kriya smiled...

sh: kriya ye kya hai??? curtain yaha??? kriya sach bata rey balcony se aaya kya??

k: are nai baba...mujhe bhi toh nai pata ki wo kaise aaye hai...

sh: hello kaha khogayi...aur ye curtain yaha kaise bataogi??

k: are...wo...looking down slowly said...mai dekh rahi thi ki mujhpe ghoonghat kaise lagegi...

sh: aaww!!!! are meri shona dulhan bangayi...im soo happy...hugged her tight...chalo ab mei tereliye dress laati hun be ready wapas jaana hai...

call...pehla nasha...

sh: hello !!!! haa bolo swayam...

sw: rey yaha garden mei ghoom raha hai so chill...

sh: kk...bye...tell him to be fast...

they cut the call...

cut to car...

swaron & kriyaansh in one car...kriya sleeping on rey's shoulder...rey admiring her...they reach singhania mansion...rey lifted kriya in his arms as he doesnt want to disturb her...he took her quietly into the house...


SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!...the whole gang shouted...this was enough to wake kriya...rey shot an glare at them...kriya got down and all 4 wentt and sat on the couch...( parents went on sm work)

all: CONGRATS...!!!!!!!!!

kriyaansh : blushing...thanks guys...

simmie: aww!!!!!! blushing...

kriya blushed a lot...rey smiled...

neha: kriya neha thinking ...wat kriya thinking now...abt whom...batao batao...

kriya blushed to core...

rey caught her ri8 hand and interwined his left hand fingrs with hers ...

rey: mere baare mei soch rahi hai...koi problem...

all: aww!!!!!! defensive huh??

kriya continuosly blushed...and the teasing game went on...servant entered...

ser: sharon ji aap ki papa aapko aur kriya ji ko bhula rahe hai...wo aapka bahar wait kar rahe hai...

sh: theek hai...turned to kriya...chale kriya...

kriya stood up and turned but rey didnt leave her hand...she looked at him he stood expressionless...this made it more difficult 4r her...

sh: ( concerned) we have to go rey...

rey slowly loosened the grip...kriya took a step when rey pulled her into a tight hug...she to responded... he kissed her on head and left her went a step back...kriya stood with a blank face...

r: go!!!!!!!! jaldi wapas aana...im waiting...

sh: kriya chalo we have to go...mamma papa wait kar rahe hai...

kriya turned and took few steps...

wait kriya...!!!!!! she turned...

vishaka: dude kaha jaa rahi ho hume chod ke...what did u think ...ki hum yaha tumlogon ko sirf wish karne aaye the???jab tak tum donon ki shaadi nai hojati...hum ladkiyan tere saath and boys ke saath rahenge...

kriyaansh: wat??? really...thanks a lot guys...

girls left...rey in devdas mood...

vicky: dekho dekho...bas ek bottle ki kami hai...

r: hahaha...haslo guys...haso...tumlogon ko bohut funny lag raha hai na??

sw: arrey...rey!!!!!!! tu bhi na kya arrey chalo theek hai toh mai bade papa ko shaadi cancel karne keliye kahoonga and tum kal kriya se mil sakte ho...

r: NAI!!!!!!!! (pouted) theek hai mai wait karoonga...

all laughed...there boys ...here girls...all gossiping and teasing...and they slept...

next day...

all were in kriyas room ...talking and teasing her...but kriya was missing him badly...and upon that sharon was busy 4rm morning and not even talked propery with her...she was irritated...it was noon when sharon atlast showed up...she entered with a servant who carried food...she ordered him to serve...he served in 5 plates...sharon distributed to all...but kriya folded her hands and turned aside...sharon got it...she asked the servant to leave...

sh: kriya khana khalo...

k: mujhe nai chahiye tum jao yaha se...

sh: sat beside her...shona mujhe pata hai tum mujhse naaraaz ho...par agar mai aaj sara kaam nai karoongi toh rasamon ke waqt karna padega...tu hi bata mai ab tere paas rahun ya phir rasmon ki tym pe...????/ bata???

kriya turned to her ,...said lyk a small child...

k: nai nai tum aaj saara kaam karlo...kal se mere saath hi rehna...

sh: acha theek hai ...ye lo khana khao...

sharon took a plate 4r herself and sat beside kriya ...all were eating talking...suddenly...

sh: waise kriya tumhare saath nahone pe itna gussa...kisiko miss kar rahi ho kya ki wo bechaini gusse ke roop me mujhpe utaari...

k: ( kriya almost spilled the food in her mouth) nai nai nai...mai toh bas...

all bursted into laugh...kriya blushed...

sh: ek min...she took out her mobile and called swayam and kept in loudspeaker...

sw: hello ...batao sharon mujhe miss kar rahi ho???

all: aww!!!!1111

sh: blushed...nai...wo sab chodo rey kaha hai...kya kar raha hai...im sure he would be restless...

sw: uski baat matlo...saala bhai bangaya mera...nai toh ab tak khoon kar chuka hota uska...

sh: laughing...arey kya hua???

sw: ye pooch kya nahi hua...saala kriya ki engagement ki dress khareedne keliye 3 ghante pehle ham sab ko showroom kheechke laya...aur ab tak decide nai kiya...ladkiyon se bhi jyaada tym leraha hai...i tell u kriya ne use poora pagal bana diya...bechara usne kayi saare dresses dikhayi...khabi kehta hai iss ki colour dark hai ...aur kabhi light...kabhi dori choti...kabhi work kam...kabhi lehnga chota...kabhi design acha nai ...kabhi kriya pe nai suit karga...kabhi kriya itni bhari nai pehan sakti,,,kabhi usse pasand nai aayega aur ...kabhi isse pasand nai aaya...phew!!!!!! he took a long breath...mai margaya hun sharon...

all girls laughed...kriya blushed...

sh: par swayam iski kya jaroorat hai?? humne toh dress kareedliya na...

sw: arey...sharon suno...actually rey ye sab apne paison se ...jo uski scholar ship aur dance mei winner hone se milta hai na uss se khareed raha hai...wo ye sab sirf apni paison se karna chahta hai...aur kal kriya ko surprise dena chahta hai...bechara bohut pyaar karta hai uss se...

all girls looked at kriya ...she gave a hearty smile...she was very touched of wat rey was dng...but suddenly something happened that allerted every one...


SWAYAM!!!!!! rey shouted at top of his voice... swayam panickingly rushed to rey while kriya grabbed sharon's mobile and was ready to shout and ask abt wat happened...

sw: rey!!!!!!! kya hua??

rey: grinning wide...milgaya...kriya keliye perfect dress.!!!!!!!!!!

sw: shouted...saale aisa koi chillata hai kya??

rey: puppy face...woh bas excitement mei...

kriya took a deep breath...gave the mobile back to sharon and sat on the bed

sw: in mobile...(came aside) batayana pagal hogaya hai ye poora...i dnt know mai shaadi tak kaise jhel paunga...

sh: chuckled...waise hi jaise ab kar rahe ho...kk bye...enjoy...😉

sw: enjoy??? huh...kk bye...

sh: aww shona tera pati kitna acha hai...

kriya jerked her head up...K: kya kaha...

sh: ohh...maine kaha P-A-T-I...kriya blushed hard...and teasing game srtd...

vicky: thank god tumhe kuch toh pasand aaya...

sw: acha chalo ghar chal te hai...

r: arrey...abhi jewellary khareedna bhaki hai...

all boys...KYA????!!!!!😲

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kriya was standing at the balcony and thinking deeply...
sharon came 4r a check and as expected she found kriya not sleeping...

sh: arrey ye soti nahi hai...agar jaldi nai soyi na toh kal subah kaise uthegi...kriya!!!!!!!!!!!kya kar rahi ho???

no response...she went near her,...4r her shock kriya was crying...

sh: kriya kya hua...placed hand on her shoulder...

kriya turned and hugged her tight...sharon cmfrtd her 4r sm tym ...but kriya was never stopping sharon couldnt take it more she pulled her back...looked at her...
sh: kriya look at me...kya hua shona...aise ro kyun rahi ho...

K: sharon mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai...bas 4 din me meri poori life badal gayi...mujhe apni family,frnds aur jisse mai sabse jyaada pyaar karta hun...sab log wapas milgaye...bilkul ek sapne ki taraf...kaash ye sapna na ho...pehle mujhe mera pyaar mil gaya...kuch dinon mei wo pyaar humesha keliy mera banjayega...kabhi lagta hai ye do pal ki...

sh: placed her finger on her lips...ssshh!!!!!!!!!! ye do pal ki khushiyan nahi hai kriya...wo teri khushi hai...its already decided 4r u,...ek saal tum marte marte jiya hai...aur nai...aur i m sure kismat ab hamesha keliye tereliya khushiyan likhi hai...agar nai bhi then i wont let anything wrong happen with u now...sharon raiprakash ki behanko dukhdena,...zindagiki sabse badi galti hogi...aur jahan tak tumhari pyaar ki baat hai...rey! mera bachpan ka dost...sabse jyada jaanti hun mai use...and he will never ever i dreams think abt leaving u even 4r 1 sec...

both cried and hugged...again sharon pulled and wiped her's and kriya's tears...

sh: chalo ab so jao...

k: haan...tum jao mai bas thodi der mei sojati hun
...

sh: pakka...

k: pakka baba...

they both smiled and sharon left...kriya was standing ther looking at moon...

any guesses????


yes ur ri8...

enters our romeo... he climbed into the balcony...kriya facing her back to him...thank u universe ji kriya ko yahi pe milvane keliye...thanku atlast isse milsakta hun ...

he tiptoed ...hugged her 4r back through (hayerama sequence dress ...both) her waist. and planted a kiss on the shoulder...

first kriya was abt to shout...but when he kissed her ...the touch of his lips told her who was it...she didnt want rey to see her tears so turned her head to other side( note: kriya's hands were trapped by rey...)

i know ki iss ne mujhe bohut miss ki...toh isse mujhe dekha chahiye...par uss taraf kyu mud gayi?? smthngs wrong...

he touched her cheek to turn her face...but he felt wet se he quickly faced her to him...yes he saw her...those eyes were red...the one he never wanted to see ...he saw that day...he panicked...

r: kriya kya hua?? tum theek hona...checked her temp...kisine kuch kaha?? kuch chahiye?? kya hua??

she jst pulled him into a tight hug...he responded and comforted her by rubbing her back...

r: kriya maine kuch...she placed finger on his lips and nodde as saying no...

r: toh phir...

k: still hugging...i missed u...

r: paagal iss keliye aisa ro rahi hai...bas ek din keliye itna rona...maine soch maihi sabse jyaada miss kar raha hun par tumne toh mujhe haradiya...bas ek din ki toh baat thi...

k: mai aaj ki baat nai kar rahi...

r: toh phir...

k: mai ek saal ki baath kar rahihun...

he was silent 4r few secs...

r: kriya maine tumse already kaha hai...( he sounded serious) ki kabhi bhi uss ek saal ke baare mei nai sochenge...got it...

k: hmm...still hugging...

after few secs...

r: toh aaj miss nai ki...??

k: bohut...

r: pata hai iski dawayi hai mere paas...

k: kya ?? looked at him...he leaned in...she pushed...

k: rey aapko humesha yahi kaam hai kya...

r: humesha nai...aajkal...he moved frward ...she hit the rod...he bent in she too bent back...he pulled her against him...strtd kissing 4rm her forehead ,nose,a little longer at lips ,chin,throat and down her neck...kriya got where was his next kiss supposed to be...she caught his hair and pulled him up...he looked at her...

r: humesha disturb kyu karti ho??

k: rey ab appko jaana chahiye ...actually aapko yahan aana hi nai chahiye...kisine dekhliya toh...

r: toh...he pulled her in...locked the door ...ab toh koi nai dekhega...

k: rey nai ,...aap jayiye yahan se ...

he pushed her onto bed and fell beside her...
she turned to other side facing her back to him...

r: okk...as u wish...he suddenly pulled down her zipper...kriya felt dumbstruck ...she was abt to turn abt he strtd kisssing her back and caught her hands 4r pushing him...he went on kissing...slowly his grip on hands loosened...he caught the bedsheet as tight as she could...he passed his finger along the spine...she arched her body away 4rm him...again he kissed...and bit her nape...she moaned...slid his hand through her waist under her dress...and squeezed near her navel...she gasped hard...he slid his hand slowly towards her neck...crossing her faminine curves...she strtd kicking him ut of passion...he trapped her legs b/w his...she struggled...he slid up and carassed her cheek...his touch on her curves were making her more dizzy...she caught his hand at the neck and squeezed it./...he slowly slid back his hand to her waist ...tightened and pulled her towards him...again kissed her back and bit her nape...she throwed her head back...

r: whispered in her ear...aaj ki raat mei humari suhagraat tak zaroor yaad rakhoonga...he got no response ...saw her breathing hard .her eyes closed...he slowly pulled back his hand pulled her zipper got up made her lye on her back straigt...kissed her once ...

r: good ni8 baatcutter ...u made my day...he went to the balcony and turned to look at her...she still layed there her eyes closed...a strand of hair fell on her face...he blewed as if his breeze would move it aside...but wait...yes it moved aside...a cool breaze passed upon her bringing her to senses...

she slowly opened her eyes sat...brushed her fingers through the hair...


k: toh ye sapna tha...kitna real laga...*phew* .
she blushed...goodni8 rey...again she fell back and slept peacefully...

rey smiled at her thoughts climbed down and rushed to his house and slowly entered his room and slept...



hope u like it...😃

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