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nj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

You described Khushi's conflicting emotions perfectly, how she felt she was wronging her sister and she wanted to be close to Arnav. It was penned very nicely. I really can't wait to know what Arnav does ,now that he knows the truth I think the poor guy must be trying to sort it all out but Khushi thinks its all over.😔 The part where he asks whether she's gonna say yes was put nicely! On the whole Lovely update!😃

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Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

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Two updates????*FanGirling*
K, hon you're a STAR.

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While the rest can hate you... This is what caught my eye...

His hand went to his pant pocket, fiddling with something that was in there.Khushi saw something heavy resting in his pant pocket. Her curious mind wanted to know what it was, but she held her tongue.

K, is it what i think it is? If it is *squeal*...

Okay come on Khushi, he just kissed you like there's no tomorrow and you still think he want's to marry Payal?...Sheesh...

But i love the way you write Khushi's conflicting emotions!!! Actually i love the way you write Khushi. Period.

And Kunal can honestly go to hell i am with Arnav on this one...

Loved the update. But that seems to be the rule with you!! 😊

Edited by Firebolt - 13 years ago

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kethgauthami1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

superb update...

am not a girl with more words but i can say that u showed ver well about inner turmoil of kushi, that he does not belongs to her but also she cant threw away her feelings towards him...

simply outstanding..waiting for ur next update

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sRistee

@crazy44

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

OMG!
poor girl :(
and i was hoping tht arnav would stop her buT maybe he is confused himself!
i realLy hope everythn wilL be alrite! and she doesnt have to get married to that kunal guy *fingers crosseD *
awesoMe update K! loveD it !!

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

awww, no i don't hate u, i love u infact!

i loved how u left it.! and y are these two so stupid? specially arnav! gosh if his rishta was being talked about wouldn't he be atleast asked once about it?! hain naa? bewakoof banda he is i tell you. i love your portrayal of their complex characters and all the more of their complex feelings and relations. specially khushi, dealing with the 2 parts of her brains u know?! the one which wants it and the other which thinks its wrong! and arnav has had his share of flings, but khushi is some1 he wants to stop at. i was feeling so bad for him when khushi was like i might say yes to kunal! that was sad !

the last scene was sooo heart breaking too, when he was like "do you want to forget"? 😭 awwe my heart nearly broke. poor guy not good with words :( call me sadist but i'm kinda glad he didn't run behind. it just gives them time to think over stuff and build up their emotional side of their relationship and everything.! i really wish u write something about arnav being angry and they having one of their encounters! 😍

and Krani you give me goosebumbs u know!! ☺️*sighs* your loving scenes are so bloody apt! i was literally shivering, and i think i read them 10 times, when he was kissing her neck and the corner of her lips.. gosh! *drooling like a lovestruck puppy*

awesome update! i loved it. specially the angst u had.! stern arnav is tooo sexy! :D

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indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

absolutely loved it, but what a heartbreaking ending 😭

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Samana Dahar

@samana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Awesome update. It is written beautifully. Poor Arhi they are suffering a lot.
Thanks for the PM.

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saikrishnars

@saikrishnars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

WONDEFUL UPDATE!!!!

HOPE THE MU IS SOLVED SOON!

PLZ DO CONTINUE!!!

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#459

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Edited:
It was a fabulous update! I loved how the emotions were clearly written. I really think Arnav should follow, and Payal an Arnav would probably win an award for worst Jodi ever, never even get nominated for best jodi! Still amazing! Continue soon, I can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Edited by mjikm1219 - 13 years ago