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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

The story seemed to be clich but the way you put it into words makes all the difference :)
You have a n inborn talent in you Rida...ever considered that some day you can write your own books and get them published...am sure it would be hit and you may even receive a Pulitzer award ;)

Love you little sister
Nandi

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

amazing yaar ...gr88
Thanxx fo pm

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ambryn

@ambryn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Hey Rida,

The OS was beautiful, very well written. Thank you for the PM.

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Love,

Ambryn

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517780

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow awesome OS

makes me want to fall in love so much

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Aashi

@Kashkidiwani

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Gr8 part!!!!
Oh sry should say a vry HOT part
that bitch maya :X
vry gr8 that armaan used her... Issey layak tho woh karamjali... Lol
vry awesome one shot
luved it to the core!!!!!!
Do write more of this type ;)

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

loved every bit of it

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harshadislove

@harshadislove

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Wow.. Amazing... :)
Write more plzzz...

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Jyo.KG_dbhusain

@Jyo.KG_dbhusain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

luved the os

really nicely written😃❤️

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

great OS

ARSH were so hot and passionate

u described shilpas's expression and emotions her feelings very beautifully .

love arman and his cool attitude .

lovely confession .

thanks 4 pm.

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

So good, so freaking good. Amazing job on the writing and description---i sound like an English teacher but whtevs. Your writing style is really beautiful and kudos to you for making such a short story so very very memorable.

Btw waiting for the update on your ff

Take care till then, Simran.

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