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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

u r back with a bang in the os world :)
needless to say liked it, loved it ... i was loving their first meeting, awing at their later friendship, blushing at their romance and feeling angry at the bet part and their seperation and then felt bliss when armaan MADE his love, their love win 😳 like each n every emotion i could feel while imagining and reading a kash story ...a simple story but when u carve it with beautiful, and perfect words with deep meanings, the story becomes special... thank u for this beautiful os rida... try to write more often... 😛 love ur kashilicious work 😊

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Exquisite piece of writing ...loved it ...thanks for the pm and do write more!!

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Sooo cute
Love da concept
Sooo happy finally ArSh r 2gether
Adorable confession
Thanks 4 da pm

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Zahra

@Xiahtic-5

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

You should have RES for me :(

Wait for of a all let me faint ommmggg you finally are done with OS *faints*...*wakes up again* eee phew i had to blackmail you so many times...Finally i have to strick from someone else hehehehe oohh my Angel and V you guys have no patience in ur self at all do youz hehehe

@Zarquuu: i luv u yaar i am juz saying bt dude next make me blackmail you like i did Ridu next time

Riduuu omggg thank you thank you thank youuu sooo much for writing this OS i am actually more nervous of the reviews :D...but seriously you wrote this OS perfectly...The OS came out beyond perfection i mean seriously look at it...its P.E.R.F.E.C.T...

I wont say concept was good but i will say you made it better the way you put it in words it all you who wrote it...who gave the meaning of love...who wrote the feelings of ArSh...

I will start i mean the meeting was perfect the way you described it way waow...I suggested another name instead of Maya but hehee i can understand what you said as well letting that one pass...The scene from bet till Armaan getting angry on Shilpa bcz of Vivek was damn well described...

Starts the next pace their attraction and all the ahem ahem scene...dude i am feeling very shy telling how much intensity you put in the scene...how much passionate and hottt the part was...The attraction in the scene was eee i am out of words i mean seriously i dont knw what to say...But it was definitely the hottest part i have read so far by you...

Moving to next scene Shilpa going that was sad yaar and Armaan confession abt love was so touchy yaar i actually felt sad while reading it...

After the leap of three years the P.A n Boss thing came amazingly...The way Armaan made her stay and made her signed contract was a good thought...Armaan calling Maya and thn dumping her ooh baby she got burnnn well serves her ryt after what she did hehehehe...

The last confession scene and proposing scene was tooo damn perfectly putted yaar i mean waow the confession was too good...The words to describe their feelings and emotions were very written Ridu...

Over all YOU ARE TOOO GOOOD RIDU i am so proud of you i mean seriously you made the concept look so much better next time if i get concept you, Zarqu and DJ are my choices and bali ka bakras hahahahahaha...Thank you sooo much for writing this OS Ridu and i did promise domething to u didnt i so juz pm me and remind me wht i promised and i will definitely give it you i promise...I love you and sorry for disturbing you to write this OS again and again and again and again...

You rock luv ya

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey Hacker!!!
I see that you are back with yet another OS :D
I have not read it as of yet...having some due examinations from 3rd day of march to the 16th day
Just wanted to thank you for the pm :)

Luv
Nandi

BETWEEN AM STILL WAITING FOR YOU TO fINISH 'Way To Submission' am not gonna rest you in peace before that :P

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

playboy Armaan and innocent Shilpa.. rocking combination...
i liked both the characters..

The OS was just fantastic and great..

Thanks for the pm..

Take care..